**Writer [Reader] To Writer!**PG 76 - Page 122

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.2k

Views

161.5k

Users

213

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

melody442 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Dellz-

Can someone help me for my FF Phirse Jeena Woh Lamhein of Arnav and Khushi

I want to know how to make Tara turn positive. Well the current track is the contract marriage .Arnav marries Khushi to in order to protect her and and give her care, but still he is angry with Kyushu regarding her having physical affair with Shyam.But still it's not shown that how he knew about this and why they are unable to clear this mu. Tara is Arnav 's ex girl friend who also is a sister of Shyam and plus she is now married to her ex boyfriend Karan aka Dhruv (Arnav's cousin) but he is not met the raizadas yet. Arnav broke up with Tara cause of Khushi and plus he came to her intentions of taking ASR money and plus how she betrayed Rahul (Anjali's husband) by being his girlfriend.
I want Tara to turn positive when she reveals to Arnav that Arushi (Arnav Khushi'3rd daughter is alive) and she is with Shyam and plus tell me how to show her saying so, when Arnav and Khushi are confronting each other after their contract Marriage for knowing the truth, like how to show Khushi falling from the cliff and Tara is accused for her miscarriage but she has turned positive and Khushi was not pushed purposely.
Actually it's Sheetal and Shyam revenge on Khushi which Tara is ordered to push Khushi but she doesn't do so.
Please someone tell me how can show Khushi falling.



OK what I understand from your post is that you want to show Tara has turned positive, and yet she is accused of pushing Khushi from a cliff and being responsible for her miscarriage. I am assuming it's only Tara (T) and Khushi (K) on cliff. In that case you can show K accidentally stepping on a stone and having a little slip and fall. But during the fall may be her mobile slips away and lands almost on the edge of cliff. She goes near the edge of the cliff to retrieve her mobile and loses balance and falls. Or since she is pregnant you can show her getting dizzy near the edge and falling. All this while T is nearby but not actually noticing Khushi. She may be attending a call / or has gone just to fetch water for K since she was feeling sick, and by the time she returns in a couple of minutes, its already too late and Khushi has fallen. Or you can show that the villains had sent one more person on the hill just to keep an eye on the proceedings, and make sure that their plan succeds even if T is unable to carry out for some reason. Both T and K are unaware of the presence of this third person on cliff. As soon as T is not paying attention and K is alone for few moments, this third person pushes K from cliff and hides again. In both the cases blame will fall on Tara despite her being innocent.
dellzcreationz thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -enchanted-



OK what I understand from your post is that you want to show Tara has turned positive, and yet she is accused of pushing Khushi from a cliff and being responsible for her miscarriage. I am assuming it's only Tara (T) and Khushi (K) on cliff. In that case you can show K accidentally stepping on a stone and having a little slip and fall. But during the fall may be her mobile slips away and lands almost on the edge of cliff. She goes near the edge of the cliff to retrieve her mobile and loses balance and falls. Or since she is pregnant you can show her getting dizzy near the edge and falling. All this while T is nearby but not actually noticing Khushi. She may be attending a call / or has gone just to fetch water for K since she was feeling sick, and by the time she returns in a couple of minutes, its already too late and Khushi has fallen. Or you can show that the villains had sent one more person on the hill just to keep an eye on the proceedings, and make sure that their plan succeds even if T is unable to carry out for some reason. Both T and K are unaware of the presence of this third person on cliff. As soon as T is not paying attention and K is alone for few moments, this third person pushes K from cliff and hides again. In both the cases blame will fall on Tara despite her being innocent.

Thanks dear
Its surely helped me
Thank you so much
What is your name dear ,😳
melody442 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Dellz-


Thanks dear
Its surely helped me
Thank you so much
What is your name dear ,😳



Hi... You are welcome... I am glad that my suggestions were helpful 😊 I am Ankita, you can also call me Ani for short :) What is your name?
dellzcreationz thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
@Ankita,
I am Sydell, you can call me Sid
dellzcreationz thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
SJ001 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Hello I want a suggestion for the name of my OS.my story is based on that how a girl raised her voice against the injustices on girls like dowry,domestic violence,rape etc.
dellzcreationz thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya007

Hello I want a suggestion for the name of my OS.my story is based on that how a girl raised her voice against the injustices on girls like dowry,domestic violence,rape etc.

Names suggestion
1) Meri Pechaan
2) A Women
"Every Women is not Weak".
Edited by -Dellz- - 9 years ago
SJ001 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Dellz-

Names suggestion

1) Meri Pechaan
2) A Women
"Every Women is not Weak".

Can you please suggest me some more names also.
Starwalkers thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya007

Hello I want a suggestion for the name of my OS.my story is based on that how a girl raised her voice against the injustices on girls like dowry,domestic violence,rape etc.


Through the cracks.

Mending Afflictions.


not.here thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
I have a strange question, if someone wanted someone to read their whole work to give feedback where would they go? I know beta readers do this but they only accept a small amount and with conditions. I am thinking specifically if a writer wanted someone to read their whole piece and then give feedback on how to improve. Where would someone find/ who would someone ask? Does anyone know? If not then sorry but the thought just popped into my head.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".