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It was a healthy discussion, lets now burry all the commas😆

Good night everyone

Don't know. Everyone else calls me lazy and says I do nothing. I am a walking, talking oxymoron so I don't know either. Yeah, night. I don't see why it would not be a healthy discussion but anyways, off you go. Hope you get lots of deep REM type of sleep. 😊

Hello, I here for another help & that is for titles of my upcoming fictions. Though, I had began to pen those down but couldn't think about a proper title.

Couple : Laakhan & Poonam from &TV's Begu Sarai [ They are the lead couple of the show ]

There are two fictions.

1] Theme : Guardian type of. Intense romance, drama.

Concept : Poonam's family & Laakhan's grandmother gets murdered in a gunshot accident. But before, breathing her last few breaths his grandmother takes promise from him that he will take care of Poonam for rest of the life & she belongs to only him. Laakhan give her that promise. But soon situation gets worsen as Laakhan treats Poonam as his possession & holds his right on her. This suffocates Poonam but she don't revolt against him. This continues till 10 long years. His family observes its more than the promise which bounded Poonam & him & they decided to get her married to someone else to lessen the burden in Laakhan's life. This enrages him to the core & he ends up marrying her through forcefully.

There are many scenes which I am gonna write/include but these are some of the main scenes & yeah they fall in the end.

2] Theme : Drama, mystery.

Concept : Poonam takes care of two old ladies. One night, a stranger takes shelter in their house due o heavy rainfall. Poonam takes care of the stranger as well. He stays there for almost a month due to some health issues which compels him to do so. The two ladies began to think they are falling in love but there was nothing between them. The stranger is none other than Laakhan. They decide to talk to both of them but both deny this respectively. Though, after deny this & Laakhan leaving Poonam begans to feel something & that happens same with him as well. He returns after a month to marry her but found her into depression as one of the lady was dead. The reason was her illness & apparently old age. He still determines to marry her & takes her away from there. Poonam struggles to keep herself away from the old lady as she was just like her grandmother & decides to go away. This left Laakhan furious. As she enters the old house she finds blood everywhere. And the old lady was shot with bullets to death. Poonam breaks down but decides to investigate the matter. Later, she finds a revolver near dead body that belongs to Laakhan.

OK, so this is it. Hope someone will be able to help me in this problem :)

---$hreya---

This just explains all of his over-possessive behaviour and his unspoken right on her.

When I write in first person, part tense and the person's thinking to himself; does he say ' I know' or 'I knew' ?

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The doubt has infiltrated my mind now. :3

The above example is correct in this context.