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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti


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Thank you so much Sans😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi... I wanted a suggestion. I have a story in my mind where the protagonist goes from rags to riches. This journey is a crucial part of my story so I don't want to just gloss it over by saying that he started with nothing, and then suddenly he got lucky and had everything. The protagonist gets success in Construction Business. So I need few logical and credible examples to show how he made a name for himself in comparatively shorter span of time. Like I can say that the prices of land he brought shot up rapidly. But I need to have some solid reasoning behind this sudden price rise. I hope I am making myself clear. So I would be thankful if you guys can come up with few ideas relating to construction business, which can lend logic and credibility to the rapid rise of the protagonist in business world.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am stuck in my plot can someone help me please
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -enchanted-

Hi... I wanted a suggestion. I have a story in my mind where the protagonist goes from rags to riches. This journey is a crucial part of my story so I don't want to just gloss it over by saying that he started with nothing, and then suddenly he got lucky and had everything. The protagonist gets success in Construction Business. So I need few logical and credible examples to show how he made a name for himself in comparatively shorter span of time. Like I can say that the prices of land he brought shot up rapidly. But I need to have some solid reasoning behind this sudden price rise. I hope I am making myself clear. So I would be thankful if you guys can come up with few ideas relating to construction business, which can lend logic and credibility to the rapid rise of the protagonist in business world.

Maybe he could make friends with an old man who bought a piece of land that once was worth less but now is worth a lot more? The man left it in his will for the guy?
He manages to land a massive contract after an initial struggle with smaller businesses?
There are probably better ideas but sp far these are the only ones I can think of. Do they help?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cortana

Maybe he could make friends with an old man who bought a piece of land that once was worth less but now is worth a lot more? The man left it in his will for the guy?
He manages to land a massive contract after an initial struggle with smaller businesses?
There are probably better ideas but sp far these are the only ones I can think of. Do they help?


It happened with someone I know that he had a land where he had to build a school but then he needed some more space for it and the land/plot behind it could be combined and the land for school could get bigger if the owner of that land was willing to sell it. Usually anyone who desperately needs something on a short notice, he/she are willing to pay as much price as the owner wants ie you can show that just behind your male patragonists plot or land, there was some construction taking place for example a hotel or school and the man building that hotel was ready to pay him as much amount as he demands ( ofcourse in a limit) and this way he had a little loose hand from his difficulties.

Basically, the price of a land rises when it has a value. For example its a commercial place, neat clean etc. Maybe you can show that the place where he had land was developing in matter of months so the value of his land increased.

I hope it helped :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cortana

Maybe he could make friends with an old man who bought a piece of land that once was worth less but now is worth a lot more? The man left it in his will for the guy?
He manages to land a massive contract after an initial struggle with smaller businesses?
There are probably better ideas but sp far these are the only ones I can think of. Do they help?


Thanks for your suggestion. An old benefactor seems a plausible idea. But I am more inclined towards second suggestion, as it highlights the merit of the person too along with luck factor 😊. Will definitely try to think along this idea... Its always good to get new ideas, and your suggestion definitely helped. Thanks once again:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rishaal


It happened with someone I know that he had a land where he had to build a school but then he needed some more space for it and the land/plot behind it could be combined and the land for school could get bigger if the owner of that land was willing to sell it. Usually anyone who desperately needs something on a short notice, he/she are willing to pay as much price as the owner wants ie you can show that just behind your male patragonists plot or land, there was some construction taking place for example a hotel or school and the man building that hotel was ready to pay him as much amount as he demands ( ofcourse in a limit) and this way he had a little loose hand from his difficulties.

Basically, the price of a land rises when it has a value. For example its a commercial place, neat clean etc. Maybe you can show that the place where he had land was developing in matter of months so the value of his land increased.

I hope it helped :)


Thank you so so much for this. Just the kind of example I was looking for. Best thing is that it allows me to highlight protagonist's ingenuity and foresight, and at the same time its very realistic and logical too. Loved it. You would be surprised to know there was an Ekta Kapoor show based on similar premise as your example 😛... Thanks once again... It was a big help :)
Edited by -enchanted- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -enchanted-


Thank you so so much for this. Just the kind of example I was looking for. Best thing is that it allows me to highlight protagonist's ingenuity and foresight, and at the same time its very realistic and logical too. Loved it. You would be surprised to know there was an Ekta Kapoor show based on similar premise as your example 😛... Thanks once again... It was a big help :)


No problem :) Really? I didnt know that lol, it was just I was putting and linking in some things I had studies last year as well as this year. 😆

I'm glad it could be a help!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello everyone I am new here. I've just finished working on a magazine project where I would like to showcase the works of fanfic writers. This first one is rathe basic but with time will improve. I would like rob know everyone's opinion on it before I go any further.

https://gumroad.com/l/october2015
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Posted: 9 years ago
Can someone help me for my FF Phirse Jeena Woh Lamhein of Arnav and Khushi
I want to know how to make Tara turn positive. Well the current track is the contract marriage .Arnav marries Khushi to in order to protect her and give her care, but still he is angry with khushi regarding her having physical affair with Shyam.But still it's not shown that how he knew about this and why they are unable to clear this mu. Tara is Arnav 's ex girl friend who also is a sister of Shyam and plus she is now married to her ex boyfriend Karan aka Dhruv (Arnav's cousin) but he is not met the raizadas yet. Arnav broke up with Tara cause of Khushi and plus he came to her intentions of taking ASR money and plus how she betrayed Rahul (Anjali's husband) by being his girlfriend.
I want Tara to turn positive when she reveals to Arnav that Arushi (Arnav Khushi'3rd daughter is alive) and she is with Shyam and plus tell me how to show her saying so, when Arnav and Khushi are confronting each other after their contract Marriage for knowing the truth, like how to show Khushi falling from the cliff and Tara is accused for her miscarriage but she has turned positive and Khushi was not pushed purposely.
Actually it's Sheetal and Shyam revenge on Khushi which Tara is ordered to push Khushi but she doesn't do so.
Please someone tell me how can show Khushi falling.
Edited by -Dellz- - 9 years ago

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