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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sunkissed

I need help in writing a consummation scene..

This can be put differently being in different situations. The point is if you have to put it on a public domain like this, India-Forums, you need to make it ELEGANT and not something too explicit. Which is where I can give you a little bit of help, try to depict more of emotion than the actions.

The rest all can fall in place.

And if still need help and be sure of what you present ask someone to review it critically for you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
^^Oh ok..It is a one night stand basically.
Will review it critically for me??
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sunkissed

^^Oh ok..It is a one night stand basically.

Will review it critically for me??

Okay. I will try. PM it to me if possible and I will give my views on it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-

This can be put differently being in different situations. The point is if you have to put it on a public domain like this, India-Forums, you need to make it ELEGANT and not something too explicit. Which is where I can give you a little bit of help, try to depict more of emotion than the actions.

The rest all can fall in place.

And if still need help and be sure of what you present ask someone to review it critically for you.


I've struggled with this myself when writing, its one of the hardest things for me to write which is why I usually focus more on the emotions of the characters rather than focusing on the consummation scene itself.
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Posted: 9 years ago
um, hello guys! apologies, but if anyone ever needs second opinions, they're always welcome to submit to the beta team. We do precisely that!
(Just leave us a PM)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sugg for an angsty FF on ArHi ( only in English and complete) 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _.serendipity._

@ Kittya_Cullen:


Thank you for such an insightful, informative post.

I completely agree with you - the layout of the forum as it is, is not particularly helpful to writers who write about less popular fandoms or who have not yet built a substantial readership. Invariably, the first few pages of the forum are mostly occupied by FFs by popular writers, and this almost always equates to FFs on popular fandoms. As a writer who has been writing about a less popular show - when it comes to FFs, that is - it has been very difficult to help my FF gain more visibility.

And, like you rightly said, neither is the layout of the forum helpful for readers who are looking for a certain kind of work, whether it is a particular genre or show. The more popular writers/FFs are often really good, but there is little chance for budding writers (who may be equally good or even better) to gain that sort of popularity. Some stop updating their stories altogether, which is a pity, but there definitely are readers such as yourself who would have read their work, if only there was an easier way of coming across their stories.

I second your suggestion for a global thread. It's a great idea!

And I'm sure your tips will be helpful to many people.



I just began one of your fan-fictions. "Love, law, inter alia." I'm only on the first few lines of your first chapter, but they already feel like such a fantastic read. Looking forward to completing it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Kittya_Cullen:
Just read your post and thank you.
I don't have an English base, in fact I always say that my English sucks.
This is to say that what you wrote made me think and I'm bookmarking the post, next time when I will sit to type down a story, I will read it more carefully and try to avoid as many mistakes as i can.

Thanks again.

We need more peoples like you😊.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I need a title for my new story.

Theme: Dark, Intense

Plot: Abhi and Pragya are divorced. Pragya didn't want to have divorce.

She begins roaming aimlessly at the road when a group of drunkard boys begins harassing her. A man, Aarav, saves her from the goons.

Seeing Aarav's comforting behavior, Pragya ends up finding solace within Aarav, but still loved Abhi somewhere deep down in her heart. ~~

Abhi gets to know of this. Things change and some circumstances take place that Abhi goes back to Pragya, asking her to return to him and remarry.

Pragya agrees but Aarav doesn't. He believes that he loves Pragya the most and Pragya is his'.

Aarav tries to kill Abhi but he escapes. Aarav dies in an accident while chasing Abhi. The spirit of Aarav follows AbhiGya and haunts them.

Who in actual is this spirit having a dark secret? Will AbhiGya be able to escape from the spirit?

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Please help. Thanks!

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Posted: 9 years ago
If I have a doubt
In my ongoing 2 stories
Phirse Jeena Woh Lamhein and Making Her Mine. Based on ipk
I am trying to implement scenes of IPK its about recreating ipk scenes in PJWL but its a continuation from the last epi but I am making some changes so that it doesn't be similar and in MHM its from the track of when khushi goes to Gupta house and Arnav takes a decision of making her mine but I am trying to recreate it by making some changes in the stories.Is it still considered as plagiarism ?
I am even wanna show the Nainital track during the Contract Marriage because it suits the situation of Arnav Khushi instead of Delhi Ma Bali Honeymoon Scene. In PJWL

Edited by -Dellz- - 9 years ago

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