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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen


You're stuck at the beginning of writing the first chapter/prologue? Or at the beginning of the actual story?

Is the wedding the only thing happening in the first chapter? Who will be there? How many people approve, or disapprove of the wedding occurring? For example, are the business associate's of the dulha's father comfortable with a possible financial/business merger between the dulha's father, and the father's business partner?

Was the childhood friend in love with the dulha from the beginning, or has it only been love from the dulha's perspective?

Is there any future adversary, or circumstance that could/will affect their marriage, or their love that neither the dulha/dulhaan know?

How grand/lavish is this wedding? Why is all of Mumbai aware of it? Does the dulha's father's company, and the father-in-law's company have that much influence in Mumbai? If so, how are the reporters responding to it, or the government? And does impact the story later down the road?

What do you see happening after the wedding ceremony? Reception? Suhaagraat?

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Not particularly great with ideas beyond what I'm writing at the time, but I hope this helped a little.

I was stuck at the beginning of actual story and yeah wedding is the only thing which will happen in the first chapter with their reception and everyone will be their,their family, friends,relatives,their business associates,media etc and no one has any problem with this marriage all were very happy with this and both of them love each other,it is not from one side and yeah in future due to some circumstance their relation will get strain and they both will part their ways away and dulha and his father was a top most business tycoon of Mumbai that's why entire Mumbai city is the part of this grand marriage and the reporters are covering this grand marriage and after marriage I want both reception and suhaagraat
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello everyone. I am new here. I am a Bengali and I registered in IF only to write Bengali stories. Is writing in Bengali fonts and language allowed here? If anybody helps me I will be highly grateful.
Please help me in this regard.
Thanks in advance.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi.. i dont think bengali language is a problem.. you can write the way you wish.. it depends on the readers if they would like to read it or not.. Good luck :)
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Posted: 9 years ago


Hi, I am here for a title of my upcoming fiction. I seriously need help!


Theme : Dark Romance & Mystery.


Concept : A unknown stranger arrives at the girl's family. He was sent by one of the distant relative to destroy the family. The girl finds him strange & literally despise him as he flirts with her. He didn't spare a single chance to tease or dominate her. He drops her college than picks her & that's how they eventually comes close to each other. After a lot of incidents, they finally confess their love to each other. But one afternoon, the girl was looking out for the guy but finds him talking to some unknown stranger & that person was a criminal who murdered her elder sis & later was sent to jail & for his absurd vengeance he choose that guy who was almost like his brother. The girl left numb & decides to run away but the guy finds & rans behind her. He catches her but proves his love is true & threatens to kill her entire family if she dares to leave him.




So this is how it is & I don't know what to name this FF. Its real dark with the guy being over possessive & obsessive who don't know about the real meaning of true love & had a horrible dark past. He fears loosing her so much!



Please help & reply soon :)



---$hreya---
Edited by Dark.Desires - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Shreya,

After reading the summary, I can think of below two titles.

1. Behind that laughter
2. The Devil's Desire

I have no idea if these already exist... you will have to check for that...!
Tell me if you like them? I will try thinking of more!

Originally posted by: Dark.Desires



Hi, I am here for a title of my upcoming fiction. I seriously need help!


Theme : Dark Romance & Mystery.


Concept : A unknown stranger arrives at the girl's family. He was sent by one of the distant relative to destroy the family. The girl finds him strange & literally despise him as he flirts with her. He didn't spare a single chance to tease or dominate her. He drops her college than picks her & that's how they eventually comes close to each other. After a lot of incidents, they finally confess their love to each other. But one afternoon, the girl was looking out for the guy but finds him talking to some unknown stranger & that person was a criminal who murdered her elder sis & later was sent to jail & for his absurd vengeance he choose that guy who was almost like his brother. The girl left numb & decides to run away but the guy finds & rans behind her. He catches her but proves his love his story & threatens to kill her entire family if she dares to leave him.




So this is how it is & I don't know what to name this FF. Its real dark with the guy being over possessive & obsessive who don't know about the real meaning of true love & had a horrible dark past. He fears loosing her so much!



Please help & reply soon :)



---$hreya---

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Posted: 9 years ago
devil's desire already exist i have no idea about the second one but i guess
1: masked reality
2:intense dreadful reality
3:obsessed love
i'll think more if you want but best of luck with your story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shreya - firstly, I must say the story is quite twisty and surely has a wonderful base, a scope to dig into the depths of emotions, past, and variety of other phases.

Secondly for the name - I am not much of a help when it comes to titles, But with this one, I would try suggesting a few -

1. Traded by the Stranger.

2. Trapped - in the web of love and lies.

3. Plan to destruct, Asked / Made for Love.



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Posted: 9 years ago


@Shenz thank u so much!

How about 'Trapped - Made For Love' And the subtext will be 'In the web of Lies.' ? Combined the two :D

@Shalini thank u dear but devil's desire already exists ( I am its one of the reader ) & behind that laughter is nice but it doesn't go with the theme 😊

@ Shirisha thank u so much for the suggestions :)


Thank u very much for the help girls! I am obliged 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shreya - Well, you were to decide since it's your story. And definitely that goes pretty well together, until you want it that way it is.

I just tried to come up with some titles as I know I am horrible with those.


Anyways, glad to help you. And you are welcome.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I need help in writing a consummation scene..

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