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shipraj

@shipraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Words wont b enough to describ hw gud this chaptr is...truely magical...

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@..mrinalini..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Honest,passionate yet innocent!!

Me likey😛

Thanks for making my Sunday beautiful!!😃

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

This is beautiful, their h0nesty, the truthfulness, the bashfullness. Let me be h0nest Devi. This left me unsatisfied but at peace

Edited by saga_twilight - 12 years ago

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

You know D, if i comment on this wonderful chapter, I am most likely to tell myself,

"Yeh munh aur masoor ki daal" 😆

So I will just relish every word, smile and smile and re-read. *sigh* So sweet. Hmmm now whose comebacks are better Arnav or Kashi...

You are the best when it comes to conversations. ⭐️

K, Happy sunday to me also.

What a great gift for working on a sunday and being at my computer *patting myself on the back*

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

such an enigmatic and mysterious personality is Kashi.. it makes me want to posses her.. know her and just decode her.. to clarify i am straight.. but the aura you create around Kashi is commendable..

Loved it Devi.. with a kid to distract and household chores,.. who manage to pull up something magnificent as KH.. is just amazing..

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

i am laughing... can you believe it???

'i would have married you in a heartbeat... but now you have gone and ruined it'

i dont know why but this last line had me in splits... i hope i didnt read it wrong... the way the emotions were flowing.. with the sarcastic comments flying each way... it made me feel that they were both comfortable in the truth and curious to know why each did what they did at that time with their physical intimacy...

and knowing kashi.. with her viper tongue... i was wondering when she would come back.. and she did with a bang... she is accepting him.. i am sure about that...

i just hope the last line was in jest to get him to react... the way he used to a week ago... i hope i didnt read the emotion wrong...

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

she is sooo witty sensuous and sooo innocent and naive at the same time!!

simply magical!!

LOVED IT!!

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rvas

@rvas

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

beautiful story...ur my favorite writer on if...great job😊

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

I have no idea what i feel right now, nor do i have words to express my emotions. I m no writer who can dwell deep nor i am good at words. But, precisely i loved the enigma you created throughout. There conversations with a pinch of intimacy between them, i loved it. My eyes are twinkling , i have a soft smile on my lips and m re-reading the entire thing again and again. Oh!!! How much i love Arnav and Kashi for there mysterious and enigmatic selves.

Amazing, Devi !!!

~Dee~

Edited by Enchantress - 12 years ago