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her_story

@her_story

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Comment on Chapter 25:

Gopika vasantham.. one of my favourite songs ever. There are no songs like that anymore in Malayalam.

You will never cease to make me fall in love with your writing, Devi. It is a privilege to read you.

-Harsha

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

That was an another beautiful update. U write short , but bring exactly the effect what some few pages of detailed writing would do...I now understand that no detail description is required. U r doing a fabulous work... I don't want to predict anything here...just love to be in your flow and enjoy how this story unfolds in further chapters ... Loved it...

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Rupa

@voldemort

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

wow..amazing...so like kashi...loved their intimate moments..

so she is unwilling cause she fears that this marriage might kill arnav...

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nj.123

@nj.123

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

~Sigh~

That was just one lovely update that made my day! You have magic woven in every word and its amazing how you pen down their conversations.

Every sentence in this update was so beautiful, laced with the right amount of humor.

I have literally fallen in love with these two, they are witty,intelligent, hot and totally adorable, how can I not absolutely love them and keep stalking this thread for updates!😆

Thanks for such a wonderful update!

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

awesome oneee...

i loved their lovey-dovey convoo teasingg so good ...

aww arhii so cutee...

thnx 4 pm 😊

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her_story

@her_story

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

I don't know when I will catch up!

But, I am glad I am reading it in one go. From experience, I know that waiting for your update is real torture. So at least, I still have about 30 chapters to finish before I have to wait for an update.

PS: I love Nalan's relationship with Kashi. And more than that, I love Arnav's bonding with Nalan.

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

There is magic about this story.

It has some kind of pull.

I don't know if I am making any sense but that's how I feel.

It was so sensual Arnav and Kashi's chat.

I am so dreading the time when this story will end.

It will definately make me cry like when IPKKND ended.😭😭😭

I am looking forward to your next update.

Thanks.😃

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Its a simple yet passionate update... The feelings these two share for each other is too strong to describe...

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bernad_shaw

@bernad_shaw

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

After a long time I log onto to IF and imagine my surprise on all the updates I have to catch up on...

The read them in one go and will re- read them multiple times today. But this update ,like every one of your other updates, leaves to me ponder how your characters get under my skin( in a good way). They leave me thinking from their point of view and I never know what's coming next:)

So beautifully written, the last few lines. Especially Kashi's predicament- the first day she met him, she wanted to kill him- she would have gladly married him. Now that she loves him- she will try and protect him from all the harm, even from herself, however difficult it might be.

A week is almost here. Is Arnav going back to KH?

Priya

Edited by bernad_shaw - 12 years ago