Manveer OS:Break Of The Dawn - Page 11

Originally posted by: ...navina...

You told me "my guess is faltu" when I said that this OS will have a sad ending. Which meant that I was wrong!

Now , why are u asking what type of ending we want?

Part 2

I can risk my life every day to spend a night with you!"

ds line was really beautiful

I loved how u turned d swambhu part of Amropali into a practical one .. very smart n innovative

language is gr8 .. portrayal of priests n Ariyan Rai is too good .. der declaration of Apsara exactly shows how society works or worked on women ..

beautifull written indeed

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

Part 2

I can risk my life every day to spend a night with you!"

ds line was really beautiful

I loved how u turned d swambhu part of Amropali into a practical one .. very smart n innovative

language is gr8 .. portrayal of priests n Ariyan Rai is too good .. der declaration of Apsara exactly shows how society works or worked on women ..

beautifull written indeed

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

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Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

@payel jiji
this is requesting. aap update hi nai kar rahi... not done ok. fiv it TODAY

Originally posted by: panchaali

I'll do it dear... wait

Give some time!!!😊

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

yaayyy!!! jiji's updating today!!! yuhoo yuhoo. tell me first, i wanna res first