Manveer OS:Break Of The Dawn - Page 13

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

payel dear...this was a fantastic ending.👏👏..al very dreamy...u encouraged me to write my FF today!😉

Originally posted by: princessSonia

yaaay deedu,

finally u updated...

but its d last part...

Yaap 😃

ohhh nooo...

i wanted 2 read more...😭

But aren't you happy with the perfect ending dear??

uday is so serious abt Manyata...😃

Yaap hez damn serious about her 😃

He loves her truely...

More than his life 😳

Mrinalini ji is so Wise...👍🏼

She is alwayz my fav dadi 👍🏼 Dadi no.1

must say d Lady really has some Brains...😊

oops Sorry not Some quite A Big Brain or A Master Mind...😆

Yaaap 😃

Loved d whole Update...👏👏

Thank you 😊

n Finally its A Happy End...🥳

Of course!!!!Readers wish writer's choice 😉

as it is Said naaa...

" All Well That Ends Well...'😳

lolz ...🤣

thnks 4 d pm...

n plz do cont soon wid

more such os's...😉😉

I'll try 😊

n don't forget ur SS - The Library Princess...😃

How could I forget Manyata Devi and her Devil student 😃

Toodles...🤗

Bye

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

awsm...manveer horse scene was bst..yayyy a happy ending...

Originally posted by: pia.raha

superbb update,i was nt well,so couldnt comment earlier!!!!!! i soo love happy endinggs!!!!! loved the manveer scenee!!!!!! they always rock!!!!!!!!!😊

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Hello Ji ji!!😃

i am hell SORRY for the late late comment, was hell busy + i was really very unwell sorry😭

Awesome, lovely, fantastic and most importantly very BEAUTIFUL OS!!
i loved each and every part of it, was really wonderful
the concept is amazing, it felt really very true and beautiful, and the way you wrote every expression and every feeling was just PERFECT!!


ManVeer love was portrayed so well!!
awesome OS Ji ji,
loved the ending, it was so cute, finally the king got his queen and they lived a happily ever after
thanks for the PM!!