Manveer OS:Break Of The Dawn - Page 9

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Awesome update

beautifully written

i loved it very much

Finally Love has struck 👍🏼

Aaryan deserves 2 b in jail

well dungeons i guess...

Mrinalini Ji is great

such a lovely person

this was my fave part

King Udayveer pinned her against the wall ignoring the fact there is presence of a third person, "Yes I am in love with you Manyata. If I can cross mountains, risk my life to spend a night with you; then Imagine what will I do in your love."

I can Imagine ...

cont soon

and a happy ending please

Originally posted by: ..Killer..

Superb Update Dii... u rock 👏

I just love this part

---King Udayveer pinned her against the wall ignoring the fact there is presence of a third person, "Yes I am in love with you Manyata. If I can cross mountains, risk my life to spend a night with you; then Imagine what will I do in your love."---

Lovely update. But that Aryan.. 🤬 He deserves to be in dungeon 😆

Although I love tragic endings but I want Happy-ending wala story 😳

Update soon and PM me for sure. Thanx for this PM 🤗

Originally posted by: edward123

Sorry 4 the late cmment
Read part 2 and 3 in one go
It was just awesome

PArt 2: Manyata's past is revealed..
Poor girl undergoes a lot of suffering
and I hate Aryan 😡whom she had considered as her own brother
How low can anyone stoop???

Part 3: I just loved these lines

"I will better die than living without you!" His voice sounded same intense.

She covered his lips with her palm, "Don't you ever dare to utter those words again".

It just reflects the pure love Manveer share...

And yeah Aryan got what he deserved

Update soon...and thnxs 4 the pm

I want this OS to have a Happy ending...

This update was simply awsome
it was also hot
manveer's love was so pure
i really loved the way it was expressed
thank god aryan was arrested
he was becoming really irritating
my favorite scene was when uday asked manyatas hand for marriage
there was undiluted love in his words
i must say i simply love this os
continue soon and thanks for the pm

a happy ending nd ye tum kya bol rhi thi k parental guidnc le lo..pitwao gi kya yaar bacho ko... dubara kbhi IF par nhi dekh paoge hme fir to..

Nyc OS!!!!

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

a happy ending nd ye tum kya bol rhi thi k parental guidnc le lo..pitwao gi kya yaar bacho ko... dubara kbhi IF par nhi dekh paoge hme fir to..

Originally posted by: andy.a

This update was simply awsome
it was also hot
manveer's love was so pure
i really loved the way it was expressed
thank god aryan was arrested
he was becoming really irritating
my favorite scene was when uday asked manyatas hand for marriage
there was undiluted love in his words
i must say i simply love this os
continue soon and thanks for the pm