Swaron OS:Ye Khalish jo hai..Wo Khamakha Nahi - Page 5

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Kaatilaana!!

Hukum...woh ladka kam tha jo ab aap bhi ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Ekdum fataak tha Yeh!!
You know i love your works...haha works toh ab choti cheez hai..mai toh aapse bhi pyaar karti hu..! 😳
The way you wrote this OS...the crux was the same but your explaination killed it!!
Way beyond beautiful..!
You even explained the meaning behind the words which aptly fitted on them.

his feeling of burning was not without any reason..this pricking is not without reason..the heat that was there between them, was not without reason..

I loved it!
Friggin' lovedd itt!!!

You have written this with so much of patience and it seems every word has been handled with care. Your every wrok displays this feeling but i felt this one more close. 😃
Needless to say. Your the best!

hey swthrt..tu inna blush kar rhi he..itna toh sharon ne bhi nehi kiya tha...😆😆

resss dONE

OMG Dear...U Did It Soo Well!...Truely Xplained D Scene In A Vry Gud Manner...U Hav That Talent 2 Observe N Portray!...I Luvd Hw U Highlighted D Dilogues,Song N Ur Vry True N Kool Views Wid Purple...Wowww...It Waz Really Beautiful!👏...Huggg 4 Dizz!!🤗

Amezing!

i'm last 😭 😭 😭 di i'm gonna cry.
Sb log cment kr chuke
mai last hun.
😭


btw forget it.

Wow di for ths os
"simply my hat's off."
i don't hv words to compliment u.
U do a fablous work di.
I so love ur writing skill.
U always left me speechless by u r writing di...


P. S.-"i'm ur biggest fan di."
my god u always left me speechless.
Pta h mai bht bda sa cment dene wali the.
Bt jb maine dkha i'm last i strt crying aur bs itna he likh paye. 😭

simply awesome.. 😃 😃 well written.. 👏 👏

as beautiful as yestdy's performance was.. 😳nd reading this today totally made for for the lack of anythin swaron related in the epi!