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swapna

@shan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

m speechless...how could u do this? u gonna kill me one day with words shooted in ur OS ...beautifully penned ...worlds all the beatiful ,best amzing heart touching words are flowing in ur OS...

I can't just expressed it...only i can feel it ...i can feel the love the pain the passion the intensity... omg swaron...they are just meant to be together ...

Eyes catching lines which touch ma heart...

She was completely in some distance world ..where no-one existed but HIM with HER

First those hypnotic eyes...than this husky voice of his...her heart was chirping like a mad bird...the glint in his eyes conveyed ..he was reading her heartbeats..more than she herself could understand her feelings...

as far as she knows Swayam...if he wants something he will get it...if he promises something ...he will fulfill it..

she fitted in his embrace so perfectly ...as if...they were designed to be together ...destined to be together

their eyes were speaking in volumes...they never needed words to convey their feeling for each other...her eyes confessed her carefully kept secret love for him

he hid her inside his arms ...protectively ...It was home coming...she was back in my perfect place..where she was meant to be ...me heart started celebrating...and my mind revolted ..yet again...

he was dominating every part of her existence ...

the burning desires..the uncontrollable feelings ...it's not without meaning...without reason...the reason ..LOVE...

the sudden glowing and dying of hopes...hope to be together with him..again...she knew ...It's madness to love him so much...but it was better than the pain of being far from him...

This madness is not without reason..I'm mad for him, but not without any reason..

muaaahhh❤️

Just wanted to say one line for u n ur work ...

At the touch of love ,everyone becomes a poet❤️

Love u dea...keep flying .,,,,,

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Fabulous OS!!😃

U penned it down so beautifully..👏👏

I liked d words u used...it was way too deeper n felt gud.

Sharon's feelings n her expressions was conveyed too meaningfully.

Marvellous one..

Well, Im a Morefan of OS which are regarding the sequences we r fond of since Aarti's OS on Haye Rama!😆

This will be a cherry on the top for sure..🤗🤗🤗

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Riya

@rockstarriya_26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Swaron made me blush all the while..I still remember a swaron scene in which they are in the kissing position in a abandoned classroom. There Sharon has a worried expression..but in today's episode she has an expression that says "finally" .. They redefined love and passion. Di ! all over again.. And so did you .. You nailed it ! Loved your expression style !!

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

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Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Fabulous OS!!😃

U penned it down so beautifully..👏👏

I liked d words u used...it was way too deeper n felt gud.

Sharon's feelings n her expressions was conveyed too meaningfully.

Marvellous one..

Well, Im a Morefan of OS which are regarding the sequences we r fond of since Aarti's OS on Haye Rama!😆

This will be a cherry on the top for sure..🤗🤗🤗

🤗🤗🤗awww snigs..ur comment means a lot😳

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: rockstarriya_26
Swaron made me blush all the while..I still remember a swaron scene in which they are in the kissing position in a abandoned classroom. There Sharon has a worried expression..but in today's episode she has an expression that says "finally" .. They redefined love and passion. Di ! all over again.. And so did you .. You nailed it ! Loved your expression style !!

awww swthrt...sorry re..mene kisi ko bhi pm nhi bheja he..hope u wont be angry..will post this in my gallery ..will send pms that time😊

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

🤗🤗🤗awww snigs..ur comment means a lot😳

🤗🤗🤗

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

deeps maine pada nai abi tak but like kiya hai, aake padthi but i am damn sure it is AWESOMEEE

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@DaShInG_DeViL

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

wao this one is very well written...seriously you explained all the unspoken emotions so brilliantly here! it seemed as if you have painted the whole breath taking dance sequence in words and never letting the tempo fall...some lines are really eye catching and makes you read them twice...commendable work...pardon me for my short comment but I am in haste as of now but couldn't stop myself from commenting.

keep up the great work :) and thanks for letting me know about it.

Edited by DaShInG_DeViL - 12 years ago

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
deeps maine pada nai abi tak but like kiya hai, aake padthi but i am damn sure it is AWESOMEEE

my dairy milk🤗

hehe...padh lo pehle..fir tarif kar lena..agar tarif ke kabil ho toh😆

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Kaatilaana!!

Hukum...woh ladka kam tha jo ab aap bhi ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Ekdum fataak tha Yeh!!
You know i love your works...haha works toh ab choti cheez hai..mai toh aapse bhi pyaar karti hu..! 😳
The way you wrote this OS...the crux was the same but your explaination killed it!!
Way beyond beautiful..!
You even explained the meaning behind the words which aptly fitted on them.

his feeling of burning was not without any reason..this pricking is not without reason..the heat that was there between them, was not without reason..

I loved it!
Friggin' lovedd itt!!!

You have written this with so much of patience and it seems every word has been handled with care. Your every wrok displays this feeling but i felt this one more close. 😃
Needless to say. Your the best!

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