Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144 - Page 93

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Posted: 12 years ago
What is Payal upto?? 🤣 An amazing update though.. 😆 Losing minds, everyone..
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOLOLOLOL!
That was hilarious.
I can't wait to know what Payal does. Lol. Continue soon. ^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! Well written last minute...

A saucy Payal and Lol Khushi is on a mission... We seem to throw a lot of parties lol...

Can't wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update! That was hilarious! Payal is so bold in this story lol. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahhahaha..that was Fu***** hilarious chapter..

I love this Payal and their kinky F*** wants...poor Akash he will be in for a ride...


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Posted: 12 years ago
the image of shyam walking in on them during their romantic interlude and then scampering off was plain funny! oh dear, khushi has heard of the 's' word but not of contraception... but she going all dewy-eyed over arnav's imaginary kids was rib-tickling!

Khushi's stop immediately reminded Arnav of the traffic sign. Nevertheless, she asked him to stoppit, and so Arnav stoppited... arnav and the images in his head 😆! loved the new word you've come up with, so apt 😃! and arnav wondering if khushi had a sexually transmitted disease was just 🤣! the silently manipulative payal is a genius... by making khushi mad and jealous with her seeming indifference to her sister's plight, she managed to imply to her that she should do something about changing arnav's mind, rather than just sit there twiddling her thumbs!

payal's bold avatar is a pleasant change, especially her statements that leave akash wondering whether he's coming or going! along with him, I too would like to know who sarita is! [by any chance, is she the sexy cartoon character that is all the rage?]... payal and kinky sex, boy is akash in for a treat! nk at his manipulative best forcing akash to accept a 'bachelor's' party with strippers was damn hilarious! akash is no match for payal... all the poor feloow can do is give in to the horrifying scenes playing out in his head and bleat 'payalji' !
wonder what khushi has up her sleeve for arnav!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome bt how will arnav marry khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sarita...poor Aakash 😳
the update was really bad and funny.


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Posted: 12 years ago
^bad? *giggle* sorry, I'm no writer. Glad you found it funny though 😆

Thanks for speaking your mind

-Vee
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love Payal...! the woman sure knows what she wants...!!!😆

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