Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144 - Page 95

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Posted: 12 years ago
A mirthful update, Vee!!
I loved this very unconventional Payal..she managed to pique up her abstracted hubby's curiosity , just by articulating an unfamiliar name...and, if that was not enough, the mention about the bachelorette party, sure left him frenzied... poor Akash, he is in a conundrum..caught between his wife and ,cousin ...
Waiting to see what methods Khushi resolves to, in her pursuit to make Arnav agree to the wedding...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wonder this Collab ff turning from arhi Collab ff to payash Collab ff. because arnav is trying to come out of monkery and kushi still thinking to complete ess word as she came from the monastery of sp nuns.

On the other hand Payal uses her friend Sarita (seductive voice) with sex in the same sentence and kinky fu** with Devi maiya in same sentence. Akash do something fast before Payal goes from oral mode to practical mode save yourself save Sarita and please save Devi maiya from that kinky fu...
Vee, I did hit like button and I did comment with pain in my jaws of smiling, grinning and laughing. with a Kinky fu...
Edited by avcmyd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello folks!

Please continue posting comments on thread 4 as this thread is past 150 pages.

Thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
A jealous Khushi is more attractive! I love how he made her jealous, he's just....Super update👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Funny. Very funny.

This was totally Payal's update. Her teasing Aakash and making Khushi jealous. She's kicking ass! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣 OMG!! my tummy!!!!! seriously... i was ROBL-ing!!! (rolling on the bed laughing) thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I enjoyed this update from the first line, to the last one. There was not a moment in those scenes, where I was bored.

I loved Khushi's innocence.

"What if I get ... pregnant Arnavji?"

I mean, WHAAA-AAATTT?????!!!!! Where in the world did that come from?? 🤣

And then we have the planning for bachelors party. Hahaha. Never thought NK had in him to blackmail Aakash.

"A bachelors party for a married man could be nice NK"
When I read married man, I just fell off the chair laughing!

Then the wicked Payal makes an entry, in Khushi's life and in the bachelor party!

I am not surprised with her clever thinking and cunning mind. She did convince Aakash to get married. And now that Khushi is without a ring on her finger, Payal knows how to change that circumstance!

And uh, the bachelor party. I can't even type without laughing. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

I loved the update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved all the updates till date !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Will khushi make Arnav to marry her...lovely update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wheres the update...
Its already two days late...
Plz update karo na...kya hai yeh...
Update
update
update
update
update
update
update
update...jaldi...

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