Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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soniachammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#901

HahA superb waiting for her dulhA and ready for kinky hey Devi Maiya loved it. Haha so finally angry K and angry young man :)

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quicksand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#902

that was funny update...loved it
waiting to see what Khushi does to convince Arnav

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#903

Poor Shyam saw them eating eachother's faces off hahah 🤣

Payal is too crazy, even Akash is dumbfounded by it haha

oo So Khushi's plan is to get Arnav marry her

Can't wait to read about how she accomplishes it 😆

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swat.g

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Posted: 12 years ago

#904

My comments on chapter 22
Wonderful update...loved the flirt hot arshi...

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J P

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Posted: 12 years ago

#905

Lmao Payal and Kinky! I cannot stop rofl! Gosh when did Payal get over Ji Akash Ji? :p

And preggy khushi! Hehe sight to behold!! But payal was smart strike when the iron is hot!

So now its now or never! What's her gora or korapati dimaag planning now? Sowie don't mind the hinglish mistakes! Hindi ain't that good with me :P

Waiting for Arnav to enter the scene! :D

Cheers

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#906

Brilliant and mind blowing updates, read chapters 22 and 23 together, both were amazing and great additions to the collaborations. So finally Payal and Akash got married, loved khushi and Arnav romancing and flirting. So khushi wants to convince Arnav to marry him, can't wait to read how she persuades him. Both parts chapters were so funny and written exceptionally well. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#907

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Payal actually spoke about Sarita and sex in the same line? Wow! No wonder Aakash went back to his ji business.

Look at the other sister. Can't even say the ess word!

This makes me wonder, what does she plan to do home alone?? The ess word?

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#908

Hilarious with this smart, witty Payal. She knows how to make people do what she wishes. she used it both on akash and Khushi..

Sarita!!!! Pheww Poor Akash is still wondering who is Sarita...

Lets see how Khushi makes Arnav marry her..Payal knows shaadi will be in 2-3 days.. All the Raizada siblings in a hurry always...

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sakhter90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#909

Great update! It was hilarious! The way khushi was thinking about the ess word was absolutely hilarious and Arnav on the other hand thought she had some kind of a disease!

Loved the way NK blackmailed akash for the bachlor party! I think the party was for him rather than akash. And the way Payal was teasing akash! Gosh he can be so naive!

Khushis on a mission to make Arnav marry her. Let's see what she has planned in her crazy mind.