Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144 - Page 54

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Posted: 12 years ago

you began with a bang! the Psychology reference of why that combination of eyeshadow had a weaker effect on hp, anjali and akash than on payal was truly epic! Only, now they were married, the romance had died down somewhat, so neither did Payal faint, nor did Akash look at her with tender worry. Instead he shot her an irritated glance and turned to his mother. dear lord, how quickly things change, and they've only been married for a few hours, at the most 😆! akash quailing at the thought of the possible damage to his eyesight from his mother's neon eyeshadow was sheer fun! just loved your take on the obsession with pheras and the other related rituals... payal's eagerness to agree with akash's suggestion to start with their suhaag raat 😉 was a welcome contrast to khushi's reaction in the show... kudos to you how you turned everything in the show on its head, with the focus on akash and payal [strongly believe they got a raw deal in the show, being downgraded to the position of props!]

🤣 was my reaction to anjali's quip that shyam had served his purpose so could be sidelined temporarily! each and every line just dripped humor that ultimately it was damn difficult to pick and choose a favourite one! must say the Geography lesson was brilliant: "Kumud lives in Ratnagiri. It's on the Konkan coast of Maharashtra which migrated to Gujarat and floated up to the deserts of Rajasthan during the last Monsoon. It's currently stationed at Delhi near Chandi Chowk. Aur koi sawaal Sanka Devi?" 😃 anything is possible in our shows... remember the mobile pool at Shantivan? again, you outdid yourself with this rib-tickler:..her backless cholis. Minimum coverage, maximum mileage. the arnav-khushi banter was the tops! poor khushi, her ab Dilli dhoor nahin has sadly changed to Suddenly, Delhi looked a thousand miles away again.
Edited by Maddy1270 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh dear... poor Payal and Akash..everything is going ulta for them.. even thier courtship!

Very nice Khushi is going to delhi, now I want to see this flirt competition between them!!!

Ps. That Ratnagiri thing cracked me up!! She does need gotas in her life.. look how far it got khushi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
F*Ly kabhi inhe milne nahi dege
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Posted: 12 years ago
This chapter was awesome!!!

I had a smile plastered on my face all through & even now I am smiling like an idiot for no reason. Thats all I wanna do when I read anything these days.. because life isnt treating me any nicely right now.

So .. Kudos! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hum aapke hai kaun... Their bet for flirting. Thats really new. Like it.
Nice update.
Akaash and his Maathey its irks me..
Shyam and singing ha ha..
Mamijis eye shadow
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Posted: 12 years ago
I got the update
i got the update...but late...

Ne ways it was damn awesome man...ur such a comedian...

Mami jis eyeshadows r still flashing in front of my eyes...
Just emagine snekwa jumping n singing oo daiyya ho...lol

who was that not so male human with arnav...better not be something fishy...

I recently came to know how a city travels from one place to another taking the entire population along with it...that was cool...

Khushis soon gonna see who flirts better...u dont know what ASR is made of...beware girl...

How is she gonna escape this payals mess...oh god

this part was hilarious...lol

thanx collabers for this oh so wanted extension...we wouldnt mind a second season too...

Lovely story...im loving it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
dis update was super hilarious and entertaining
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Posted: 12 years ago
what twists and turns...keep it going girls ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates. Great idea of clip on gotas. Like the combinations of the characters. Wow. Akash and Payal got married.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Akash and Payal got married

and who answered Arnav's phone?

Let the games begin "Lage sharth"

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