Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144 - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago

I am still trying to gather my bearings and type something rational...an arduous task, considering the fact that, my sides are aching...😆

I am clueless as to where to begin...Mami and her brahmastra -the eyeshadow, Akash and his inner monologue, his digs at ashram wali dadi, the fetish for pheras by Nani, and, Shyamu's Dhaiyya Ho...not to forget Anjali's insouciant eloquence and caressing her tummy...
But,the best part was on SC...😆 ( it is going to be etched in my memory for a very long time)
A&K's convo , the repartees and A's come-hither query...beautifully penned..
Payal's phone call left Khushi baffled...I think she is unaware that PayAsh tied the knot...ab dilli door lag rahi hain...🤔
A wonderful and thoroughly enjoyable update, Maxine ji!! ..an elixir...thank you for those liberal doses of hilarity...much appreciated..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Will be away till 22nd March 2013 so will be inactive for that time and will catch up with stories on my return. thanks
Totally loved the update , I was just craking up laughing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Am so glad round two had started!! Go Arshians!! :)

And my god akash and guts? Very hard to believe but plan back fired! Lol I loved the deal :p so much for the hurried wedding n all :D

And payal was named what haddi?? Hehhe nish nish! But elaborating maamijis eye make up was the highlight!!

And picture perfect plan with help of kumudh n slb n ratnagiri route map! But now delhi seems too far all over agai! Start from the scratch Ms KKG else your Asr will do something else to show you whose the baap at flirting! :D

Loved the jiji theri jethji deewane! Oh all memories!!

Buddy this was fun!

Cheers
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 18
awesome part...
that was too good...
poor Aakash...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb Update! enjoyed it! well done!! Happy to see the new list of updates and eagerly looking forward to them! great job everyone! ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is an absolute gem! A hilarious chapter. The references to SC were very good. Brilliant writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just can't stop laughing after this update. Too good seriously... 😆
Specially the part where Mami threatened with nu suhag raat to Payash and they have to go through the whole wedding again ... And Anjali's dialog about Shyam and his finished work with her 😆
So Khusi n Kumud are friends here.. Even i didn't know places change states like this.. .
Was that really arnav trying to flirt with Hum Apke hain kaun Dialogue 🤣
Khusi doesn't seem to go to delhi now after hearing Payal's mrg. Wonder what will be Arnav's reaction on this news...
Can't wait for the next part..

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update ,loved Arnav's and Khushi's conversation😊...
waiting to see what Khushi will do now...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was quite a good update..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

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Firstly, you have done the mehnat of reading all the 17 chapters before this one and it shows. The update is perfect in every way possible. ⭐️
I will now list down the things that made me laugh a lot and made me wonder how much more pagal you must be in real life to write something like this.
The neon green and hot pink eye shadow of Mami (her deadly weapon) that could blind normal people, but since the other members were conditioned to it they only shaded their eyes but Payal, not accustomed to this, fainted. Ivan Pavlov must be laughing his butt off in his grave at this use of his Classical Conditioning theory... 😆
PayAsh are just married and Aakash is already irriated! Men! 😡
This is definitely IPK 2 where the entire wedding rigmarole with all the rasams and sambhars and the madness and the Raizada frenzy with all things traditional will be redone for PayAsh. 😃
Payal now wants the pheras and Aakash wants to start backwards with the Suhaag Raat? 😉 IPK 2.0 main sab ulta?
The digs on aashramwali Dadi, Shyam's Daiya ho and Anjalis requirement of Shyam for her Rajkumari only were super funny 😃
When Khushi Called Kumud... and planned to go to Delhi. I have not seen SC but reading your sarcastic take on it I know I am not missing much, what with all the floating of a part of Maharashtra to Rajasthan which is now docked in Delhi 😆
Backless blouses and Mr. Goddess of Wisdom Moon Man 😆 😆 😆 😆
I LOVE a teasing Arnav and a jealous Khushi 😳
You reminded me of lagi sharth! Of Jiji tere Jethji deewane! 😔 I miss all that.
But then you made Arnav say Hum Aapke Hain Kaun? and who was that on the phone? A surprisewa???
Loved the update 😊
Dont say thanks!


@Orange: Quite, quite pagal. But very cute too. 😊

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