Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144 - Page 55

Wow that was a brilliant and mind blowing update, honestly it was so funny from start to finish. You are a brilliant writer to write comedy, the whole update cracked me up. Mami's reaction was hilarious to find out Akash and Payal got married and the way you described mami was awesome. I loved when Akash said they were going to have the suhagraat and then go backwards with the traditions and about Shyam singing "daaiya ho" fabulous. Loved khushi's cunning and clever plan to go to Delhi, that was awesome and khushi being jealous that was adorable. Wonder who the lady was that answered Arnav's phone and his attempt at flirting was brilliant, khushi had such a laugh. A outstanding addition to the collaboration, also I'm so happy the amazing writers have agreed to write further chapters this story is mind blowing and brilliant. Continue soon xx

Maxine, you are wicked and you know that!!!
You have made every single silly non-nonsensical thing in the show, pay! and how!!
you even did not let Bhansali go.. is it what he did to Ratnagiri in his new show? How dare he 😛

It so much fun, this chapter...but you know what I think... all you writers are so bored with Arnav and Khushi being around each other all the time in all stories that you are making it extra difficult for them by keeping them forever bichde...keep it coming😃

Wow.. Best news hat many of u are writing again in this mad journey!!
So happy!!!!!! This update was fantastic cant stop ROFLing.. From mamis eyeshadow , akash inner voice to arshi's hum apke. Gr8 work!

awesome..too good..nice..continue soon..😊

very nice...very funny as well to see life with a different aspect

Omg that was hilarious! I was laughing throughout! Akashs inner thoughts were just too good! I loved the link u made with saraswatichandra! I was actually thinking the same thing! The phone conversation was so cute. Loved the way khushi was teasing him about flirting. Can't wait to read more!

payash got married😲 super fast aren't they😆