Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: group_1223

i m da 1st one 2 comment...feelin so proud abt it...lolz... 😆 😆 😆 newayz...it was simply superb.....gud too gud.....i luv junaid's character....he s sooo amusin.....n ya u din't ve 2 say thx 4 da comments on the prev. part...so make sure...no thx this time or ever after dat.....n well done....the story z gettin more n more interestin.....n ya...its kewl 2 see amna shariff as a model...n diff 2.... 👏 vv



no thanx ayesha..........is this ok now?
ya i want to make something diff.................as i m quite bore with the kashish/amna's middle class girl look or the rich business man daughter's look
so i think to try something diff
hope u r enjoying

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: fakhra

wow ana..............soo sorry 4 late comments........actually maine story parh li thi per jub bhi comments kerne ki baare aate........net mai prob ho jaate......aab moka mil gaya..............

hmmmmmm........subse phele to thanx k aapne mujhe yaad rakha.........
aur now comments.........
very good.........kool story.......kuch alag hai subse.........
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hey mehreen
nice to see u dear
don't say sorry as its never too late
like to say that u like my story
no thanx 4 being here😉

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
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very nice part ana.....hhehe juniad latoo over laaj..lolzzzz.....waise ab muje imran abbas thoda thoda acha lagne laga hai..lolz.....great going continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: rajeev1

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very nice part ana.....hhehe juniad latoo over laaj..lolzzzz.....waise ab muje imran abbas thoda thoda acha lagne laga hai..lolz.....great going continue soon



not latoo............but a fan of him
woh baat ho gai na
iss ko chahay zamana or laag to us ka dil chahay

imran abbas is cool..........
nothanx

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ana

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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
ana dear tune apni story ki second part post kar di...me sooo happyyyyyyyy.............. 😃 waise me thinking who is junaid's sister...& ya me also thinking why is junaid not joining his father's business...me also sure that very very soon he will join his father's business...this is my guess............ 😉 tho heroine laaj ki entry ho hi gayi...wah wah wah kya grand entry hui uski...tooo coollllllllll....... 👏 hmm..tho junaid laaj ko dekhkar apne hosh kho baita hain...that sound's intresting... 😳
aur waise dear me thinking agar junaid ki ab aisi haalat hain tho tab uska kya hoga jab laaj uske saath hogi......... 😆 ana dear the part was very nice........ 👏 ab tum please junaid aur laaj ko jaldi se milwao........ 😉
please continue soon...... 😃
love u.... 🤗
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sun_423

ana dear tune apni story ki second part post kar di...me sooo happyyyyyyyy.............. 😃 waise me thinking who is junaid's sister...& ya me also thinking why is junaid not joining his father's business...me also sure that very very soon he will join his father's business...this is my guess............ 😉 tho heroine laaj ki entry ho hi gayi...wah wah wah kya grand entry hui uski...tooo coollllllllll....... 👏 hmm..tho junaid laaj ko dekhkar apne hosh kho baita hain...that sound's intresting... 😳
aur waise dear me thinking agar junaid ki ab aisi haalat hain tho tab uska kya hoga jab laaj uske saath hogi......... 😆 ana dear the part was very nice........ 👏 ab tum please junaid aur laaj ko jaldi se milwao........ 😉
please continue soon...... 😃
love u.... 🤗



no thanx suri dii
loved ur comments
junaid is not wanting to join his father business as her sis is handling it remarkably and along with that junaid want to do something of his on.......................
and don't worry
junaid and laaj will meet soon
luv ya too

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
no thanx guys 4 ur precious comments
here's 3rd part

after seeing laaj junaid left
now we see whats happening to our heroine

LAAJ reach to mr.shah's cabin and knock at the door
mr.shah:come in
laaj enters and after seeing her mr.shah just stand up and strech out his hand to shake but his hands was full of ketchep so LAAJ ignore that and just starts convo
LAAJ: ASSLAM-O-ALIKUM
mr.shah: WALIKUM SALAM..........app ko knock karnay ki kia zaroorat thi..........app janti hain k app k liye iss company k darwazay hamesha khulay hain
LAAJ:janti hoon........likin app jantay hain k kissi bhi kaam ka aik asool hota hai..........kuch rules and regulations hotay hain..........or kyoun k main app ki company k liye kaam kar rahi hoon tau app meray boss howay or main employe.........so i think now it must be clear
mr.shah:completely impressed by her..........kaash aap k jaisi soch har kissi ki ho.........newaz u take a seat........i will be back in a min
mr.shah move towards the wash-room which was in his cabin and LAAJ starts seeing here and there jab uski nazar table pay pari file pay parti hai
she picks it up and open it jab 1st page pay hi aik pic usay nazar atti hai........(ofcouse its junaid) jiss k neechay baray hi istylish tareeqay say junaid likha gaya hota hai
laaj us pic ko dekhti hi reh jati hai or aram hi naam leti hai:JUNAID
yeh naam boltay hi janay us k dil ki ghantiyan kyoun bajnay lagin theen.....(mujhay lagta hai k anurag prerna ki wind chimes hain....hai na).......janay is naam main aisa kia hai.......jo yeh naam boltay janay ko dil chah raha hai.........aj se pehlay tau aisa kabhi nahin howa tha
itni deer main mr.shah aa jatay hain and she leave the file
mr.shah:so mis LAAJ........hum app ko aik fashion show k liye leyna chahtay hain.........iss fashion show main hum indian culture ko dekhana chahtay hain.....
LAAJ:thats really intresting.........as k abh say pehlay mujhay jitnai bhi assignments millin.......unh sab main western culture ko dekhaya gaya tha and it very sweet of u k app is modern era main bhi apnay culture ko nahin bholay.......
mr.shah:tau hum haan samjhain
LAAJ:ya sure............aap papers ready karwain or main kal aa k sign kar doon gi
mr.shah:thats gr888...........i hope k app enjoy karain gi........hamari taraf se app ko full corpuration provide ki jaye gi
LAAj:ok mr.shah............abh main chalti hoon.......she stands up and go

guys abhi k liye itna hi
as i m going to be sleepy now
kal surely post karoon gii

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ana

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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
nice...i m da 1st one 2 comment again.....luvly part....so heroine maam ko atleast hero saab ji pix hi dikha di...dat was sooo kewl...gud job ana....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: cool_SK



no thanx ayesha..........is this ok now?
ya i want to make something diff.................as i m quite bore with the kashish/amna's middle class girl look or the rich business man daughter's look
so i think to try something diff
hope u r enjoying

lol
ana

ya...its much better.....i noe....doin diff stuff is interestin....ya..i m enjoyin it....gud job so far.......n i m sure u r gonna keep up wid it in da future as well....

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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
ana dear just toooooooooooooooo gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd...........i loved the part dear............ 👏
tune kya DHASSU , EK DUM BINDAAS part likha hain.. 👏 dear tho laaj wants to take junaid's name again & again.. kya baat hain wah...par is baat pe main kehna chahugi yeh tho hona hi tha... 😉 dear the part was really very coollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll........ 👏
plz continue soon....... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago

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