Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
hey sweetheart..nice ...its very nice!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: SujalkiDeewani

hey sweetheart..nice ...its very nice!! 👏



no thanx kinza sonu
accha laga k tumhain story ka intro accha laga

lol
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 1

we see a front view of great building....with a big board on which "SHAH INDUSTRIES" was written
then we see the back of a guy who just entered there..........we see his hands in which he has wear a rolex watch and had a file in his hand.........then we see him moving towards the elevator and as he enter......a fat man has take space of two persons and have a burger in his hand............the fat man was continously eating the burger but with a bad manner.............the guy get irritated that he kept his file infront of his face to trying not to see the man
guy:(we have not seen his face till now)........can't u just stop
fat man:r u saying this to me?
guy:angry......app k illawa kia yahan koi movement kar raha hai jo main usay rookon ga.....
fat man:what am i doing?.......i m only eating my burger
guy:don't u know the way to eat
the fat man also gets angry
fat man: do u know to whom u r talking?
guy: i don't and either don't want it........as k tum jaisay chootay loogon say main baat nahin karnay wala
fat man: chotay loog........acha.........likin aj say pehlay maine tumhain iss office main nahi dekha
guy:woh main interview k liye aya hoon........likin main tumharay saath time kyoun waste kar raha hoon
the lift stop on the 10 floor and both of the came out of it
the guy goes to the counter where a girl was sitting
girl:may i help u sir
guy: yes u may........hi i have an appoinment 2 mr.shah 4 the job
girl:he is already waiting 4 u sir
the guy bid her bye and went in to the room of mr.shah
he knocks at the door
guy:may i come in sir
a man was sitting on the chair having a file in his hand which has covered his face and having his chair's back towards the door
man:yes u may?
the guy enter with his file
guy:GOOD MORNING sir
mr.shah:GOOD MORNING............have a seat
the guy sit down and the man move his chair and now he is in front of the guy but file is still on his face
mr.shah: so u have done MBA in 1st class
guy:yes sir
mr.shah:and what job do u expected from me?
guy:this is on u sir
mr.shah:if i have to take the desicion then i m not giving u any job...........not even of my peon
guy: but why sir
then the man take the file off and the guy was shocked to hell
mr.shah: kyoun k mr.junaid...........jo shakhs mujhay tareeqa sikhaye..............usay tareeqa sikhana mujhay khoob ata hai
the man was the same man who eat burger in the lift
and then we see the guy fae and he was definately our dashing rajeev aka junaid
junaid:sir i m sorry..........mujhay n...na...nahin patah tha k app
mr.shah:k main app ka boss hoon.........or mujhay app jaisay employe ki koi zaroorat nahin.........leave this office now
junaid:but sir
mr.shah:security........(some mans come in)......iss admmi ko bahir phenko
junad:theek hai theek hai...........meri bhi koi izzat hai...........job nahin deni tau na sahi........mujhay bhi tum jaisay motay dambo k saath kaam nahin karna jissay khanay ki tameez nahin..........janay woh office kaisay chalata hai....
mr.shah get furious
junaid see that and went towards the door but as he reached to the door he turn back and said
junaid:motay dambu..............and run
mr.shah get very furious on that and order the security to catch junaid...........but before they can catch him he was in the lift and was successfully escaped

abhi itna hi.............tell me k starting acchi lagi k nahin

lol
ana
Edited by cool_SK - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ana dear sorry i m late to comment abhi tumahri yrah story dekhi u r expert in story i love each of ur styory 👏 u rocks

and ur siggy is too good 👏 yeahi surprise tha na bahut accha surprise hai luv it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i m soo glad dat u started another story ana.....its jus simply teriffic....n da 1st part was really funny...lol.....ase bosses ke saath aysa hi kurna chahiye.....will b waitin 4 da nxt part...gud job on ths part.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
ana dear a toooooooo goodddddddddddddd first part yaar....... 👏 seriously it was sooooooo nice....you know what teri yeh story ka first part padke i couldn't stop laughing yaar....... 😆 that fat person eating his burger, junaid's reactions then finally junaid calling that person motu dumbo... 😆 all were very damn coollllllll yaar...........keep up the good work......... 👏
tu please agla part jaldi se post kar..me really can't wait for long........ 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruti_gauri1

ana dear sorry i m late to comment abhi tumahri yrah story dekhi u r expert in story i love each of ur styory 👏 u rocks

and ur siggy is too good 👏 yeahi surprise tha na bahut accha surprise hai luv it



no thanx sur di...........u r not late at all.................no thnax 4 likin all my four stories
secret jab reveal itnay acchay say ho tau accha khud lagta hai
no thanx 4 liking that

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: group_1223

i m soo glad dat u started another story ana.....its jus simply teriffic....n da 1st part was really funny...lol.....ase bosses ke saath aysa hi kurna chahiye.....will b waitin 4 da nxt part...gud job on ths part.....



thanx ayesha.............ya u r right................woh mr.shah kuch zyada hi shahi dekha rahay thay.........tau phir yeh tau hona tha na

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_423

ana dear a toooooooo goodddddddddddddd first part yaar....... 👏 seriously it was sooooooo nice....you know what teri yeh story ka first part padke i couldn't stop laughing yaar....... 😆 that fat person eating his burger, junaid's reactions then finally junaid calling that person motu dumbo... 😆 all were very damn coollllllll yaar...........keep up the good work......... 👏
tu please agla part jaldi se post kar..me really can't wait for long........ 😃



haila di..............no thanx liking
and plz abhi control karoo.....................app k peet main dard na shuru ho jaye...................or agar aisa howa tau meri story kaun parhay ga
i also like the mottu dumbo sequence
ya me trying to post soon
luv ya

lol
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
👏 👏
This was 4 da siggy just luved it Ana 😉

Now story ab tumhari story k baray mein kya karoon....reading ur stories made my urdu much better not thanks 4 tat 😆 newayz itz just too goood da concept n da 1st part was really funny...keep up da gud work....continue soon 😳
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This was 4 da part 😃
Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago

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