Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Adildagr8

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This was 4 da siggy just luved it Ana 😉

Now story ab tumhari story k baray mein kya karoon....reading ur stories made my urdu much better not thanks 4 tat 😆 newayz itz just too goood da concept n da 1st part was really funny...keep up da gud work....continue soon 😳
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This was 4 da part 😃



no thanx adi
shukar hai pasand aaye
likin iss bar 4 a change main kuch zyada urdu nahin maroon gi
k
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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice ana...heheheh bechara mota..lolz....juniad is very arrogant yet funny hehehekehekehekeheke....
continue soon.....herione ka bhi intro karwao na 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev1

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very nice ana...heheheh bechara mota..lolz....juniad is very arrogant yet funny hehehekehekehekeheke....
continue soon.....herione ka bhi intro karwao na 😉 😉
great going



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no thanx jii
ya junaid is funny
or wait wait
heroine bhi aa rahi hai

lol
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
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motay dambo 😆
loved it ana 😆 😛 😉 junaid entry was gr8 👏 mr. arrogant ha 😛 😉 😳 gr8 part ana 👏 now plz post next part soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: parvathicanada

motay dambo 😆
loved it ana 😆 😛 😉 junaid entry was gr8 👏 mr. arrogant ha 😛 😉 😳 gr8 part ana 👏 now plz post next part soon 😊



than parvati
junaid ki entry ko gr888 tau banana tha na abh
ya i m trying to post dear

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
ana dear continue kar na...plz... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok ok
so sorry 4 delay

here's 2nd part

junaid escaped from the mr.shah's office succeesfully...........as he came out his phone starts ringing
he see the name and smile a bit
J:hay di...........
J:salam........(we can't here junaid sis voice.....)
J:kaisi ho........
J:maine job ki talash main.............
J:haan di mujhay patah hai k app chahtay ho k main dad ka business join karoon.........likin main app ko bata chuka hoon k main khud kuch karna chahta hoon......
J:di.........don't worry about me.........i m fine and am going to meet my friends..........talk to u later

junaid cut the phone and was about to go when a car stop in front of mr.shah's office.........a black benz..........(all the guards which were on the duty at that time starts to correct there positions and thereselves to......junaid was surprised to see all that).........from which the driver comes out 1st and open the back door............we firstly see a feet steping on the ground and then we see that its a girl........we have not seen her face yet as she has her back towards us...........she has wore a white churidar pajama having silver work on that........

J:kia baat hai iss ki............lagta hai k koi bohut hi bari film star hogi........jo sab ki yeh khalat hai
after that he sees that some journalist were coming towards her and after seeing that the guards move forward to stop them........and was putting there gr888 effort that might be that girl impress with them........but the girl ignore all that and move forwards to the entrence of mr.shah's company
after seeing all this............junaid also gets suspicious to know who is she..........but after 2 min..........he was stunned.........as the girl reach to the entrence gate she turns back and media starts clicking her photos..............and she went inside too........but junaid was still in the same position.........he came into senses when a guy tell him that his phone is ringing
J:(still ignores the phone bell)..........yaar yeh tau woh..........my favv model.......no 1 model......LAAJ hai......(his heart start beating really fast as he take her name)
but the mobile was continously ringing.......atlast us nay tang aa k mobile utha hi liya
J:(in anger....to distrubing him).......kaun ullu bool raha hai
Salman:yaar........main salman.......salman bool raha hoon(I.N........salman is sujal's uni's best friend and is played by IMRAN ABBAS.....who also worked with rajeev in SUN LEYNA)........or tum nay mujhay ullu kaha
J:(still angry).......or nahin tau kia.........hamesha galat waqt pay phone kartay hoo.........tum jaisay ullu hi ki wajha say mera chance nikal gaya
S:chance........what chance?????
J: the famous model LAAJ se milnay ka..........i was so stupid
S:smiling........yes u r.........shukar hai tum manay tau
J:still angry.......main apnay app ko stupid iss liye keh raha hoon k tujh jaise ullu ko dost banaya...........jo mujhay hamesha galat waqt pay phone karta hai.........aj agar tu call na karta tau main us say mill leta
S:(emotinally blackmailing him)ok..........tu aik larki k liye mujh jaisay dost ko chorna chahta hai........mujhay patah chal gaya k tu kiss tarhan ka dost hai......maine kabhi nahin socha tha k aik larki........aik larki k liye tu mujhay chornay ko tayar ho jaye ga
J:(understand that he is fooling him)haan........kyoun k tujh jaisay idiot ko dekhnay say accha hai k main us hoor ko dekhoon.......
S:angry at that........accha tau yeh baat hai.....main abhi di ko phone kar k batata hoon k tune us din....
J:aik dam dar jata hai.........nahin......nahin......dekh tu tau mera dost hai na(makhan laga raha tha)......mera sonu sa pyara sa dost........dekh aisa kuch na karain.......main tujhay aj sham dinner pay lay k jaoon ga
S:(thinking style.).......hmmmmmmmmmm..........chaloo theek hai.......tumhain iss bar maaf kar deta hoon..........likin resturant meri pasand ka hona chahiye.......k
J:relief.....done
S:ok phir raat ko 8 bajay ...........theek hai bye
salman hangs the phone and was tooooo happy.......
junaid........after that call........he was so nervous........
J:angry....janay maine salman ko kyoun bataya.........abh ullu mujhay kissi expensive hotel main lay k janay ko kahay ga..........or al hi tau di nay money order kia hai.........abh aik hi din main sab ka safaya........baqi din kia karay ga junaid...........soch kuch

ok guys
abhi k liye itna bohut hai
no sorry suri di.........actually heroine ki entrence bhi tau kuch especial banani thi na

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i m da 1st one 2 comment...feelin so proud abt it...lolz... 😆 😆 😆 newayz...it was simply superb.....gud too gud.....i luv junaid's character....he s sooo amusin.....n ya u din't ve 2 say thx 4 da comments on the prev. part...so make sure...no thx this time or ever after dat.....n well done....the story z gettin more n more interestin.....n ya...its kewl 2 see amna shariff as a model...n diff 2.... 👏 vv
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Posted: 19 years ago
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n ya...luved ur speical entry 4 da heroine... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow ana..............soo sorry 4 late comments........actually maine story parh li thi per jub bhi comments kerne ki baare aate........net mai prob ho jaate......aab moka mil gaya..............

hmmmmmm........subse phele to thanx k aapne mujhe yaad rakha.........
aur now comments.........
very good.........kool story.......kuch alag hai subse.........
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