Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 39

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ana dear toh finally cont kar hi diya.... 😉
thanx a lot 4 treat.... 😃 heheheheh
hmm vaise R.S. ki entry bhi kafi achhiii karayi hai aapne.... 😛
vaise junaid ne finally bol hi diya.... 😉 lolz yaar laaj kya even m shocked ki usne is tarah bola.... 😃 hahahahah lovely part.... 😉
gr8 gng..... 👏 aur jaldi jaldi cont kiya karein..... 😳 hhehe 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago


thanx dear
😳

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

wonderful part pls cont soon



thank u golu
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: KulBin

hey ana dear toh finally cont kar hi diya.... 😉
thanx a lot 4 treat.... 😃 heheheheh
hmm vaise R.S. ki entry bhi kafi achhiii karayi hai aapne.... 😛
vaise junaid ne finally bol hi diya.... 😉 lolz yaar laaj kya even m shocked ki usne is tarah bola.... 😃 hahahahah lovely part.... 😉
gr8 gng..... 👏 aur jaldi jaldi cont kiya karein..... 😳 hhehe 😆



thnx bina jiii
haila............app itne shocked na hooo
😆

or jaldi jaldi
koshish karti hoon
par nahin ho pata

kia karoon😕

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 27

On sudden saying of Junaid "I Love U"………Laaj was looking at him, 1stly with shock and then with love………both someone was there who can't stand this moment.

Yug take out a gun from his back………….a take laaj anf junaid on gun point

"what do u think"……..at yug saying laaj and junaid came to senses and look at him

"U will cont this mellow drama and I am not gonna say or do anything"………he points to junaid and said to laaj

"hey laaj………..come to me……otherwise ur lover will be dead"

Junaid holds laaj hand and said, "I don't care about my life…………but laaj will not come to u"

"u better leave this decision on laaj"……..he look with anger on junaid and ask laaj to come to him………."no never……….i m never gonna come to u"

"ok then"……….he points the gun to junaid and fires………….a bullet pass by his arm and blood started coming out from it……….

"now if u say no………..then my next bullet will be on him……….and this time there will be no space 4 bullet to pass.

Laaj got stunned on seeing blood coming out from junaid hand…………and start moving towards yug………..junaid hold her hand firmly but she release herself and went to him…

Yug catch him and gun points her head and ask junaid to move from the door

Junaid was helpless coz his life was now in yug hands, he move backward and yug came out from room

Now situation was like junaid was in his room and laaj and yug was outside the room…………yug ask laaj to close the door of room and laaj do as he said but during closing the door…………laaj and junaid were continuously looking at each other having tears in there eyes………

As the door close………….junaid run to door and wanna open it but it was looked from outside………junaid try hard but of no use annd he start crying and sit down on floor holding his head in his arm

But after some time………….door open and someone came inside……..but junaid was so deeply engrossed in his sorrow……..his grief that he didn't even notice that someone was sitting beside him……….and then……..his hands were removed.

Junaid look up and got stunned…………….then smile having tears in his eyes and then hug the person

"I thought I lost u Laaj"

yes that was laaj……………hugging him………."I never wanna loose u……never"

junaid was still hugging and laaj was too having tears then suddenly her hand reach where junaid got bullet and his blood was there on her hand…………she break the hug and said

"u r bleeding……………don't u care"

laaj tore a piece of her dupatta and wrap the wound………….

"it didn't hurt me that much…………as the few mint without u hurt me"

as junaid said………….laaj who was making a knot after wrapping the wound……..look at him

"I love u"

Junaid said with intense in his eyes

"I love u too"………..laaj too gave in and hug him again

"sure" junaid get a teasing tone

"totally"…….laaj said with a smile

"but how did u get back"

"well……….as yug take me outside……

Flashback

As yug was taking laaj out from the elevator…………sum one had pointed gun on yug's head………..

"leave her yug…………….or otherwise…………….u will be dead"

at that………….with fear……….yug leave laaj………

laaj saw a lady was there holding a gun

"who r u?" yug ask him

"me……….i m the friend of that girl………….who love u like hell……….who give herself to u……..and u………..u betrayed her………..and forced her to do suicide and when she was having ur child"

"of whom r u talking?"

"ya……….how did u remember that…………..u have done this to many girls………remember yug………..Maya"

"Maya"…….. he said under his breath and got stunned

"So that mean u r her friend Luv"

"not Luv………I was Luv only for Maya……..but 4 u……..I m Luveeza Khan…"

"Luveeza Khan…….. My rival's company owner"

"yup………u got it right now…."

"that why u take my every project"

Luveeza smile at that….. " u r so stupid yug………..u never think to find out why I m doing this to u…….and now……….u have to pay 4 ur sin"

Luveeza call Police and police take him away…

Laaj come to her and thanx her

"No need………..i was just doing my duty…………..i wasn't able to save my friend……..but by saving u…………..i will think that she is alive and happy with me……….and now her soul will rest in peace"

"no……….her soul will not rest in peace until this monster pay the price of his sins"

"don't u worry……………..he will surly gonna pay it"

both smile at it and laaj bid bye to her and left to elevator.

Flashback Ends

"We have to say thanx to her in especial way………as she save the most especial thing of my life…………."

"yup………….and my life too"……..laaj said with a teary look

"ok………lets leave……….otherwise 2 other monster will be here"

"hey………..how dare u call my sweet bros monster"……..laaj hit him on his chest

"ah…………that hurts"

"so u better not call my bros ever a monster"

"see there r soon gonna be my brother-in-laws………..and I have heard that brother in laws are mostly play a role of bone between a chiken burger that's u and me…"

"oh"

"so 4 me……………they r monster"

"u lay there…………..i m going to my bros………u better dind someone other….…so that my bros will never be a monster in ur life"………..laaj stand up

"what is this yaar…………….i got u right now and u r leaving…………that's unfair"…junaid hold her hand

"so u promise u never gonna call them a bad monster"

"ok……………coz they r good monsterz"

laaj again hit him and there lovly gight end and they left 4 outside

Rehan see the police taking yug with him………….he got that something big happen..(P.S…………..his contact with Junaid was break as when junaid run to green room………….his microphone fell down)

Rehan and Bilal run inside and see laaj taking junaid out

"What happened?"…………Rehan asked

"Nothing big…………….gonna tell u all after we reach home…."

"ok"

"oh my God…………what happened on ur hand"

"Oh……….a bullet passed near by my hand………….nothing to worry"

"Why…………just firstly leave to hospital………and then will go home"

Junaid refuse…….but neither rehan hear anything neither bilal and laaj and take him to hospital and after apply bandage take him to home.
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part ana dear 👏 finally yug is down 👏 junaid ne apni dil ki baat bol diya 👏 i hope everything goes good now 😃 😃 fantastic part once again. 👏 cont soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Hay partner kya part likha hai yar sach main maza aagaya superb yar 👏m happy that junaid & laaj confesed thier love 4 each other 😳&😳😳 😳that ugly monster yuv is in jail 😃 & ofcourse the entry of "LUV" was just rocking yar simply superb👏 whenever u write the dhasu entry of ;uv i feel bad that i didnt wrote that wellab u😕 but over all the part is mindblowing👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
ana yaar the story is going too well.. mujhe bohat pasand aa raha hao... 👏 continue karo na jaldi..ab sachchi intezaar nahii ho raha hai.... 😊 😛 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago

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