Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella

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Cintila

@Cintila

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

A new SS !! Its fab really !! Please please please update soon. Nd pm me too 😳 Loved it !!⭐️

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Wow.. One more story from you Anu .. Great!! 😃

Double update!!! Superb.. 😛 Awesome start ⭐️.. Interesting concept.. Loved Manvi's character a lot.. Very unique.. I really liked Chanda's character in Dev D and as u mentioned here Manvi's character is little bit inspired from that, so it sounds very interesting to me.. Her emotions, her loneliness, everything is beautifully portrayed 👏.. Virat is cute😳.. I guess he is little disappointed in her, because she couldn't recognise him.. Loved their nok-jhokh.. Manvi is really possessive of her beeji. Loved her thoughts on her favourite picture.. Beautifully described 👏.. 'Kutta'- the dog, nice name 😆.. Im really excited to read the next part.. Will be waiting for it.. Thanks a lot for the pm 🤗.. Take care 😃

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afreen

@afreenkansal

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

cool update
great story
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Nice yaar veryy good...

Pleasee continue soon...

Thanks for PM me...

Cant wait for your next PM...

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

You started a new story! great!

I really like this story, how will Maanvi adapt her ways in India, how is her friendships grow ...

How will the family help her...

Wonderful job!

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keerthana

@keerthu27

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

loved really a different concept.manvi london return wow.pls continue soon.and thanks for the PM.and pls continue two feet left and sachha pyarr.😊

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

hey dear
We liked ur all stories and this one also
I feel bad 4 manvi, her parents didn't give time and blame her why she is like this
Thanx 4 d pm
Waiting 4 ur next part

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princesshelen

@princesshelen

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Awesome start
Ooh...so virman childhood friends
And again meeting after so many years...
Brilliant idea
Update soon
Thnks fr the pm

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

hey i really liked ur story... continue soon nd do pm me😊

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MadhuChowdary

@MadhuChowdary

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

hey anu...new story ha...concept is good...i didn't remember chanda's character in dev D...but ur story seems interesting...

already two parts...u r on a roll girl...coming to the updates...i have to find some new words...i guess i have used everything to appreciate you for ur work...suggest me some...lol...but seriously these are amazing...and you are making every update better than previous one...i liked manvi's character in this...so virman are childhood friends...i guess virat was upset with manvi's behavior...she didn't remember anything abt him na...new and fresh story...update your all stories asap...thanks for the pm and take care...