Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

👍🏼Loved the second update...Like Virat's intro...n i guess he was staring cz he was shocked 2 his frnd come back changed as in depressed...each n every detail is amazing...kutta the dog is nice...😆 N finally virat helped her remember who exactly he is...Maanvi is still the same its just she made alot of barriers around her so no 1 could come no where close to her...*Superb👍🏼*!!

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Anagha

@anu1989

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

OMG this is so amazing 👏 Read both the parts at once. I must say I luv this Maanu😊

So VirMan were friends back then, luking forward to them becoming partners & lovers soon

Thanks 4 the PM...

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Wow Anu...awesome ss...
Loved it to the core... 😊
Have read both parts...it was awesome...loved manvi character here...
Virat and manvi noks jokes were great too...
So virman were friends...wow...looking forward for their friendship again...
Will be waiting eagerly for the next part...thank u so much for the pm... 😊

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-GayathriK-

@-GayathriK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Omg!! that was fantastic!! i just loved the concept! Virat and Manvi were childhood friends and now they have met after a long time again in India. i loved that doggy part and the butterflies flying in the air! hahaha that was kind of cute. i just cant stop adoring the concept and the story. i can already see that virat is surely be one of the soul reasons for changing or bringing back the old maanvi. ohh i just cant control my excitement!! eee... hehehe . continue soon

and thnx for the pm!! 😃

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

The 2nd chap was damn good...loved there 1st meeting...hehheheehh...cont soon

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Dik

@Dik..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Nice start...
Manvi in a new avtar..
sounds intersting...
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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

A new ss by u... wow... 😊
U just made me laugh nd smile at a same time... M missing my granny now... Fab work yaar... loved it... ❤️
And dat name of dog Kutta... how original lol... 😃
Awesomeee update... 👍🏼
Cant wait for next part... Continue soon... 😊

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abhilasha143

@abhilasha143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Hi Dear, i just read ur story and i am already addicted to this. Maanvi is trying to be tough but yet she is soft. I think Now maanvi will remember her childhood and hope she will like everybody.
Virat is the one she is referring as her childhood friend. right? Virat has started teasing her in their first meeting only...typical virat style..
Maanvi is possessive of her beeji...very much natural. I wonder what happened between beeji and Maanvi's dad. Thank you so much for your wonderful stories. Your writing skills always amaze me.
Love you so much for this story and of course for three other wonderful stories which are fantastic. Two parts in a single day...wow...lots of hugs and kisses for double update. 👏👏👏
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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Wow!!! Both the updates were amazing!!
Manvi's character is very unique...loved it!!!
The way u described manvi's emotions was superb!!!
Eagerly waiting 4 the next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!