Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Wow m luvng ur langoor n chipkali, great start n i hope it goes a long way ntertaing me.. Cntnue soon nd hav too say m waitng for ur stories updates too.

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Anaida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Oh gosh, i love dis new Mannu too.. she is so cute... just cant wait wen she and Virat wil have feelings for each other..

Secondly I loved the way you wrote this part today.. loved the language.. u r too good.. i was into splits...

Im looking forward to your other story updates too... (i know its tedious to updates so many stories... take ur time)

Best,

anaida

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preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

I am late, but late coming for commenting has become my usual routine now😆.I'm sorry.

Coming to the updates, I am in all love with ur stories , from sacha pyaar , tlf and now this one .I feel so close with this SS somewhere to the character Manvi.

Specially , in these lines "The deal with me is there is always something going on in my head. I cannot switch it off. " " I somehow don't like being around a lot of people", all i see is me and in various places in this story I feel me.I feel so connected with the female character Manvi . I love the way u make the readers have a connect with ur characters.I love the character Virat too.A lovable character. And the way Manvi thinks of her Beeji.And the way she thinks of her relatives, a small part of me is like that😆.And regarding her happy happy smiling cousins , love it😆.Loved all the three updates and specially Manvi .Love the way , how u show two different characters Virat and MAnvi but how they share some common things.I loved it.Waiting for the next update.Thanks for the pm😊

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Awesome Update..! i read couple of times before commenting...Maanvi is sweet but at the same time not so good...she wouldnt argue with virat for her beeji...N it was hilarious...tht maanvi couldnt pronouce 'R' at the age of 15...😆its great that VirMan equation has not changed...little changes like he flirting thats obvious guys would b guys...but i guess they would again confine to each other as she is back...n he even made her comfortable by introducing in their gang of frnds...now i guess she would lisn to tanu n jeevika's boring story...😆!

theres alot to for me to type but i restrict it here Anu...Thnks for the PM!

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

awesome update!!! manvi nd vilu's frndship.. jst loved it😃 continue soon nd thnx fr da pm😊

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Afshan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Though i hav decided nt to cmment untill i got update on other two as well bt cant stop myself as u wrote so beautifully! Its seriously amazing lovd how virat made manvi laugh thru hs kutta! Hehehehe bt on serious nte i really likd it n nw looking frward to ur thrd story as well whch is equally brilliant like previous ones!
Bt that doesnt mean i will spare u i want two left feat super long update ASAP

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

res

still have to read all the 3 parts

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shona9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

This once a long update as well as
An amazing...
Virman r frnds...
W8ing 4 d next part...
Tnx 4 d pm...

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Wow... Awesome update... First kutta nd now totha...lol.. Unique names like Virman lol... Loved it... ❤️
Vilu nd langooolll was hilarious... 😛
And cant wait for next update... Wanna knw with whow Virat was talking lol... 😉