Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

MInd Blowing..!!!YAY..!!! u Updated..i wanted an update for this for a long time..but din't want t pester u..:)

Loved the Update..! Poor Virat was torn between his promise made to beeji n his feelings fr maanvi...love the way he spoke his heart out...he simply goes off topic with her...but the unexpected was Maanvi's reply to him..break up..that would b 1 hilarious scene..how would he do..Maanvi monitoring this event would be even mre good...Eager for next...since u have allot to continue..please try n update Anu..:)!!!!

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richa002

@richa002

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#252

woow... wonderful update...
confession??? i was shocked😲😲... but so happy...yayyy...
manvi is really cool in this story...
wat will happen when truth of manvi's mam will come out??
update soon... nd pm me next time...

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

So now the real reason is out but kept quiet... It will be one difficult time.

I can not wait to see how this unfold, superb job!

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Superb update!!
Loved virat nd manvi's convo!!
Finally the secret is out but is kept hidden from manvi!
Can't wait to see how the story unfolds!!!!
Plz update soon!!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!!

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

I feel bad for Virat, he's stuck, awww the guiltt! :/

aahahhahhaahhaahh the knock knock jokes :P FOBLL, nd then ekkkss he asked her out, yippeee *dances on broomstickkk*

Why did you stop?????

I want a longgg update soon plzzz! :P

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anamica5

@anamica5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

awesome update 👏

virat kissed her hand aww how sweet

cont soon

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IISHITA

@IISHITA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

awesome update written well

Virat is in a huge dilema, and instead of revealing her mother's condition he revealed his feeling

Manvi appeared quite mature in d part whr hetells his dilemma. vry nice

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Aenna

@Aenna

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

Eeekkksss finallyyy u updated dis
storyyy gosh... All were waitingg so desperately to read dis...
Nd believe me its d best update till now...nd i reallyyy loved it..
I no poor virat he was so much in confusion to tell her or not..coz
her nos if manvi wud come to no about this from sumwhere else nd also that he knew ut then she will be hurt more... Nd omggg for what purpose he took her to d cafe nd what he ends up saying...lolzzz but i think dats great he finallyy told his feelings to her...awww dat lil kiss was cute...i cant wait for dere real kiss :p lol thnkfully maya will be out nd virat in...maya can go wid sushant lol..
Now i cant wait for virman romantic nd cute moments as a couple...
Plzzz update asap...nd thnx for d pm nd plzzz dont take more a day to update lol...now we cant wait for months so plzzz make it fast.. 😊 😉

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

OMGGG fab update so VirMan togther as couple...Sherni Manvi blushing.. haha.. ad Jealous Virat whn she was talkin abt Sushant... 🤣 Lmaoo... nd d way he was thnkn abt touchn nd kissing her... loved everythn...!!! Muahhzz... ❤️