Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

cant belive it
he has really confessed, that was great...
feel sorry for manvis mom but happy for VIRMAN

Quote

kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

OMG did it yu just update this one thats a pleasant surprise yet shock thanx alottt for updating 😃
awesome update finally itsgonna be virman no maya no sushant 😃
i liked the way the proposal cum confession was soo informal yet direct loved it was just sooo simple yet shocking tooo 😃
the confusion virat was into was soo easily solved by manvi now manvi can nt blame virat tht he didnt let her know bt i still feel virat shud say it to manvi wat if sumthing happens to her mom she will never forgive virat for it ...
liking the frankness in their relation and in this story virat is kinda those shy types and all manvi is kool dude ya liking tht 😉
she cracking those silly jokes and instantly chanching virat's mood and making him smile how sweet then virat's confusion on saying cute or sexy then she teasing him abt maya those cupcakes and stuffs bechara virat its really embarassing 😆 😆
update next part sooon and do pm me 😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Bhabani90

@Bhabani90

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Awsum awsum awsum.. Just a fadu mindblowing update.. Virat actulay revealed his feelings. Great..

Quote

.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

OMG Anu u updated this😃😃 unexpected suprise :DDD i was like shocked 😲 haww is it?? YES it is yayy !!! awesome Suprise !!! i m loving it ❤️
virat confess ??really eeks !!! such a simple yet beautiful confession !!! i really really really loved it ❤️❤️ ~~~ that part was juzz tooo awesome !!! A big grin on my face now😃😃😃i can't stop smiling :DDD the way manvi react after the confession awwn😳😳the update was flawless yaar 👍🏼 manvi joke was really hilarious !! 😆😆waah kya sense of humor hai 😉 especially the second one i loved it😉😛😆 virat make a nice decision by asking manvi indirectly !!! this shows manvi would juz broke down :(( dunno wat will happen when the truth will come out 😔 Brilliant update👏👏 looking forward for next part !!! dunno when will next update of this will come ~~ 😛 par phir bhi i will be waiting ~~~ thanx for the upcoming pm Anu🤗

Edited by .Yamin. - 12 years ago

Quote

Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Wonderful update Anu!! ⭐️⭐️👏👏 Loved your surprise a lot! 😃 Virat and Manvi are going to date each other!! Yaay!! Bye bye butterscotch 😆.. Loved the way you have portrayed Virat's dilemma.. Superb 👍🏼.. He didn't want to hurt Manvi and on the other hand he didn't want to hide the truth from her either.. Manvi is an unpredictable character.. She pretends to be tough but in reality she is an emotional person.. She really loves her mother.. She kind of helped him to take a decision but I think Virat should tell her the truth.. Loved the way Virat confessed his feelings 😃.. Unexpected but beautiful ❤️.. Nothing was planned.. Just straight from the heart.. He kissed her hand!! Awesome Anu!⭐️ Loved the update ❤️❤️.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm in advance.. Take care 😊

Quote

Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

lovely update he cares so much for manvi as shes a fragile being loved the way he told her his feelings bt she takes it rong -cnt wait to see virat's reaction n see wat happens next update soon 😉

Quote

rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Awesome updt...after long time...finally virat confessed...this most sincere confession ever...lolzzz...cont soon

Quote

bhavishiya

@bhavishiya

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Love u...wht an amazing writer u r...plz keep updating...dnt stop...bcoz u bring smile on our face...whr in it is very rare from ppl u xpect...love u

Quote

Anum

@anum20jamali

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

yippie, nw dey rt a couple, yay 🥳

i hope it works out wel nd both of dem take it seriously

i realy want manvi 2 knw abt her mom nd virat 2 support her til d time her mom gets well

plz cntinue soon, it was an amazing update 😛

Quote

pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#250

nice update he will able to tell her about her mom health
and he said that he like leave with her
and what happen when she will get to know about her mom health
update soon