Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

ohhh anu u updated it after such a long time but it didnt lose its essence... thats the best part of ur ffs... they remain fresh in one's memory...

loved it n thank u for updating umbrella...

LOVED the whole update...!!!! the starting was good in virat's dilemna can be understand by everyone... he raelly wanted to tell manvi but then he was scared about her. virat talking to himself wale dialogues bang on the like you want her to be yours... n " who's dere...??? " carcked me up... reminded me of my childhood days... :D

n virat finally confessed his feelings... i am soo happy... n manvi's reaction at the end made me even more happy...

"I think it will be fun. Break up with Maya. I don't want to be the other girl." I hear her say.

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virali

@ViRaLi13

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Thankyou Sooo Much for updating this!!!! I loved it <3
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!

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shreeya121

@shreeya121

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

woooh...!!!

finally virat confessed his feelng n manvi accepted...

dat ws amazing...

bt hr mother... she is suffrng frm cancer i jus hope dat she get wel soon...

inshort d update ws mindblowng...

thanx 4 d pm dear...

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meg

@meghakrystle

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

oh goddd.its lovely.i luved it core.was waiting 4 a long time.u really took a long time.now anu,its a reqest.pls dont make th next update late.cant wait.plsss

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Superb updt after a long time...I got really happy when I saw you updating this one finally andwoww it was really worth the wait...Cant believe virman will be now dating ...Yuuuhuuu...Cont soon this time and thanks for the pm...

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Avika

@Avika318

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Wow!! U updated this story after a long time!!
But the chapter was totally worth it!!
Virat finally confessed!! And virman romance toh hayee😳!!
Continue really fast and thanks for the PM!!
x Avika x

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Tejeswy

@kushal90

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

You updated this one.!?

I'm nt dreaming right.!? pakka.!? 😆 😛

Ohkie first of all... hmmm... i dunno... i'm blank 😆

Wt do u want me to tell u re.!??

That you have got the most amazing talent that no one else can ever get...?? But i think u already knw it 😉

Bt i've a request plzzz update this one also tym to tym 😊

Update sooon nd do pm me 😃

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

it was an awesome update
loved it
loved the way virat confessed to her
hope she accepts his love soon
please continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm

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Nisha

@nisha33

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

gosh i loveee this!!!! i can't decide which one of your stories do i like the most. arghhh i love all of them!!!!

this update was jsut out of the world! they will date now? i can't wait... please don't torture me or your readers and update soon.

i'm not joking- i would have paid to read your stories.

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Suarez

@Suarez

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Il confess .. i had forgotten this story ... just re read all chapters again ..
Just love it ..
did he just propose to her like that ...???
Eeekkksss... it was so cute .. N Maanvi's reply as well ..break up with Maya first !!
That means they are going to date ??
Awesome update !!
Thank you for the pm !

Take care 😊