Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella

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deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

the proposal was nice 😊
but i guess the timing was a bit wrong on da part of virat...one moment he is thinking of springing that shocking news of her mother on her...da next he is proposing to her?? i mean he is really turned into a nut case 😉

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nandini menon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

finally he said he like her... and she too said yes...

but poor viraat... his sumersalts fall into trash can vali dialogue was super ...

continue soon...😉

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Nandita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

You updated it after such a long time!!!😊

And again, you managed to bring a smile on my face with your wonderful update!!!!😃

Loved the update to the core!!!!!😊

Lol...Manvi's stupid pranks!!!😆

The way manvi made him understand was just amazing!!!😊

And the proposal was very surprising & so straight!!!!!!!😉

I had really not expected that Virat will confess so early, but I just loved it!!!!!😊

SUPERB UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃👏

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itsfate

@itsfate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

sorry for being so late

awesome update

loved it

continue soon

thanks for the pm

Edited by nisha_virman - 12 years ago

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Viru_Neutrogina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Nice update...want to know wats gonna happen...pls update soon!

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kinz

@kinz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Plz is ko bhi update kardo plzzz

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negha

@negha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Superb Update...Loved it a lot...Continue soon..

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aman-2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Waiting for next update

Plz continue soon

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.LiveLaughLove.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Anu, it has been months since u updated. I know u r busy updating ur othr stories. But plz update this one too...

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meghna325

@meghna325

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Posted: 11 years ago

#280

I just read this story in one go as I didn't about this SS of yours... This story is really different and very well written. Loved it can you please update all your stories , All your stories are very different from each other although it revolves around the two characters Virat and Manvi. You really have a wonderful flair of writing ..keep it up and keep posting the updates... Waiting to read more in each of your stories...