Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella

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sweets1126

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

it was a very long update!! thank u very much!!:) and thanks also for the pm!:D

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Awesome update yaar loved it...

Feel sad for Manvi and her mom...

Continue sonn thanks for the PM..

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bluebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman
manvi is one crazzy thing ...
liked the way he thought he already convinced her bt the next moment she dumped the whole thing in the dust bin ...bechara virat 😛
and like his point of view for manvi his caring towards her smiling wen she smiles 😊
and then tht punishment to her for hurting herself
aand the end was shocking with another twist ...
😭manvi with cancer and she doesnt even knw abt it
|plss update sooon
thanx alott for the pm 😊

manvi doesnt have cancer, her mom does

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Superb n Awesome Update👍🏼..~! First m happy that u gave us Virat's POV...i was so right ... he is a dumbo...Maanvi had to tell him that y is she mad...when he found out he followed like a mad bull...n then followed maya as well...n the best beating Sunny that Maanvi not Virat...which shows she is stupid n has her ways of reacting but then she also knows to give it back...

Virat knows Maanvi too well...esliye forced her to college n their little heart to heart talk was pened awesome...the best 'God that smile, so heavenly!! Ah! I am so falling for her!!!!'

HMm...that would take some time for both to answer the question...but Virat surprise was sweet but then Maanvi's mom has cancer...hope now Virat tries n puts some sense in her that Parents love their kids but dont show or some logical explanation that would clam Maanvi down n help her accept life as it is...😊

Thanks for the PM Anu...~!

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Omg.. I already hav tears wit da last part. U r an awsum writer girl.. Jst luvng each n evry work of urs.

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Awww fab...virman fight was so funny...virat is actually suck of manvis tantrums...lolzzz...bechara...but the last part was damn shocking...manvis mom is cancer patient...ohhh nooo...wat will happen when manvi come to know this reality?...sure virat will b there for her to support her...but will her mom able to survive?...sad...cont soon

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Disha

@daydreamer9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

virat is such a dumbass.typical man!!!he couldn't figure out why she was mad by himself.😡

"Master Chef Manvi. What's cooking???" I asked walking into the kitchen and smelling the pot that she tasted out of. "Wow!!!! This smells so good. I am going to eat the whole thing." I said trying to butter her up. I din't even know what it was. It remotely resembled pasta; I am going for a really wild guess here. "Manvi, yaar, tu toh bohot talented nikli haan??" I praised her, clapping my hands.

"Ohh really?? Are you going to eat the whole thing???" she asked me sweetly with a wide smile.

"Ofcourse!!!!!!!!!!" I replied grinning. Maharaniji is now talking with me. Finally, she is done being mad at me. Thank you god!! Varna patha nahi aur kya kya drama dekna padtha?! These girls are so stupid, all you need to do is praise them a little, they get uber-inflated and start soaring up in the sky floating in their own little bubble.

She kept smiling at me, she took the whole dish still hot from the burner with a cloth, opened the cabinet below and dumped the whole thing in the dust-bin without taking her eyes of me. Her smile suddenly changed into an angry glare. My heart which was so proud of my tactfulness, suddenly sank into the bottom of the ocean. Naukanti!!She threw the dish in the sink and turned to walk away from me.

loved this part!!!

i love this manvi.defying everyone.tell her to go right,she'll definately go left.loved how virat reacted when he realized his mistake,loved his concern n desperation.

loved the kick...that too with 3 in heel.😆

loved how virat made manvi come to college.she's damn cute.their heart to heart convo...sooo cute.the whole college scene is so freaking awesome.❤️❤️❤️❤️

virat's falling for her...aww.

manvi's mom has cancer?is that why she sent manvi to india?feeling worried thinking how's she gonna react to this when she'll find this out.😔

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

i have only one word to say anu that it was a superb update

thanks for the pm

cont soon

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

hey anu fab update!!!!!!!!😃 it was so nice... virat cares so much fr manvi... nd da way manvi said sorry 2 him it was so cute😛 omg smeone has cancer bt dnt knw who?? plzzz continue soon nd thnx fr da pm😊

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sania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Superb update!!!
Loved it!!!
Loved how virat controlled manvi's anger!!!
Manvi's mom got cancer, can't wait to find out how manvi will react!!
Plz update soon!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!