Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella

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JESMY

@JESNIA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

AWESOME AS ALWAYS
EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE

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Nandita

@Nandita217

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

WOW!!! Awesome!! Awesome!! Awesome!! Lovely update😃

Yaayyy!!! Slowly Virat is falling for Manvi😃...

What a twist you have brought...Manvi's mom is having cancer in this story!! Aaaww...this shows how much Manvi's mom loves her...but Manvi will not be able to handle this news or her mom's loss😭...feeling very bad for her!!!

Poor gal!! But i know whatever phase may come, Virat will be always there for her😊

Apart form this...i wanted to say that YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER😊...the flow which you make in the story, the way you express everything is incredible!! It directly touches my heart & i m pretty sure that it would have touched each & every reader's heart!! I mean i cant write so beautiful stories...trust me i m a horrible writer!!😛

But reading yours & many other people who write, is always a treat man!! We guyzz are really very lucky that we get to read so good FFs😊

I have told this to shilpa09 also that all you guyzz are amazing...actually i had wrote it in the comments of her FF...& took some of the lines of my comment which i wrote in her FF & i wrote the same in yours also😛...sorry but i told you i m a horrible writer so i didnt got any more ideas in my tiny brains😛...but seriously trust me...what all i wrote is direct from my heart!! Seriously i am a fan of all your guyzz's FFs...they are just amazingg😊

SERIOUSLY

JUST AMAZING👏

I like all your FFs...no actually i love them...specially "SACHHA PYAAR"...i m just in love with that FF😃

With mentioning "SACHHA PYAAR"...i also want you to remind it that you have to update that also because sweety there are people like me who are waiting badly for its update...so pleassseee update it😛😊

Do update it fast!! Cant stay from this drug for long😉

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bluebolt

@bluebolt

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: nanditam2107
WOW!!! Awesome!! Awesome!! Awesome!! Lovely update😃
Yaayyy!!! Slowly Virat is falling for Manvi😃...
What a twist you have brought...Manvi's mom is having cancer in this story!! Aaaww...this shows how much Manvi's mom loves her...but Manvi will not be able to handle this news or her mom's loss😭...feeling very bad for her!!!
Poor gal!! But i know whatever phase may come, Virat will be always there for her😊

Apart form this...i wanted to say that YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER😊...the flow which you make in the story, the way you express everything is incredible!! It directly touches my heart & i m pretty sure that it would have touched each & every reader's heart!! I mean i cant write so beautiful stories...trust me i m a horrible writer!!😛

But reading yours & many other people who write, is always a treat man!! We guyzz are really very lucky that we get to read so good FFs😊

I have told this to shilpa09 also that all you guyzz are amazing...actually i had wrote it in the comments of her FF...& took some of the lines of my comment which i wrote in her FF & i wrote the same in yours also😛...sorry but i told you i m a horrible writer so i didnt got any more ideas in my tiny brains😛...but seriously trust me...what all i wrote is direct from my heart!! Seriously i am a fan of all your guyzz's FFs...they are just amazingg😊

SERIOUSLY
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.
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JUST AMAZING👏

I like all your FFs...no actually i love them...specially "SACHHA PYAAR"...i m just in love with that FF😃
With mentioning "SACHHA PYAAR"...i also want you to remind it that you have to update that also because sweety there are people like me who are waiting badly for its update...so pleassseee update it😛😊

Do update it fast!! Cant stay from this drug for long😉

hey...will try to update saccha pyaar. I am a bit struck when I write that, will definitely spend some time and update it soon. Thanks for all the sweet comments :)

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avika

@avika26

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

feeling guilty for not commenting for so long
sorry kaan pakdke sorry😭
these was best update among all updates of umbrella👏
i have no words to describe how superb ur writing is
u left me speechless all the tym wid ur writing...
i m getting comples my other commentors...😛
so copy paste all above coments...😊
keep going😉

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Anjali

@cutiepie2244

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Lovely n amazing update.. continue soon n thanxx 4 the pm...😊😊😊😊

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MaebyFunke

@MaebyFunke

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Ow I'm running late on commenting on updates..just read the last two chaps of this ff which are by god uh-amazing!

Virat knows better how to tackle Manvi and she knows better what a person is Virat, how he exposes his inner feelings before her and she manages to share her sorrows is perfectly amazing!...Now that Virat had finally realized that he is falling for her, I can't wait to see the story moving further...

Twist in the tale- wow Manvi's mom is going through so much but she kept a brave face before her daughter and made her to go to India, I think that's the reason she sent her away!...Wah aankhe bhar gayi meri lol!..Now that Virat knows this I wonder if he would tell Manvi or not?

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sajit

@sajit

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

hey where are you its been a long time

update soon

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virali

@ViRaLi13

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Phew! finally I read Chapter Seven and eight!!! Must Say an amazing Writer you are . Itne Thoughts aate kahan se hai tumhe.
But I found some scenes hilllarious!!!
Maanvi : Virat my orange isnt peeling itself! typically Maanvish!
"Manvi Chadhary said thank-you and sorry to another human being, and that too on the same day!! Dhanya hogaya prabhu, mera jeevan dhanya hogaya." I closed my eyes and joined my hands in reverent prayer.
Virika were making out in the library!🤣
Bang on! this is what I want to read! I hate Typical Lovey-Dovey stories! this is what I call my type stories! love you for writing them ❤️ Contine soon . Waiting for your PM :-)

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bluebolt

@bluebolt

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

This story is on hold too. Right now working on addicted-will come to this after i am done with that. probably in the next month. Sorry, but do follow my current SS-addicted. Luv ~Anu