Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Amazing update. .its nice they both startd sharing about them. .cont soon

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Fabulous update Anu👏👏👏.. Loved Virman convo in the lounge.. They were sharing their secrets with each other 😳.. Loved the way Manvi defended him in front of his dad.. Loving her more and more.. Manvi's thoughts are really funny some times.. She thought that Virika made out in library 😆.. But the ending was lil sad.. Virat should not have said that.. She must be very hurt 😔.. I hope he will realise his mistake soon.. Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care 😃

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

wonderful update
loved it
thanks a lot for the pm
please continue soon

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

I am so in love with your work. In whatever forum it is. I always end up reading all the updates from the verey beginning to the end -until then- in one day. It is so good. I love how her feelings are so real and easy to relate to while it actually never is. And how Virat is able to get her out of her shell with just being himself. Kutta and Tootha, they are soo good. And then Beeji. From the story I can make out she is a cute old caring lady. I hate Maanvi's mother. I really hope Maanvi ends up falling in love with Chandigarh and decides not to return to London. Since the people in Chandigarh are so much more loving. I understand though that Maanvi always had wanted her mother's love. And that can't be replaced by any other's love. Her mother has to understand somewhere she was wrong, and has to try to make it up. I love the story. It is brilliant like it always is.

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deepika03

@deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

that was a very mean thing to say to a girl. i am with manvi on this; he deserves to be treated with anger

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Superb update!!!
loved how virat and manvi opened up to each other!!!
the joke manvi played On Maya at the end was awesome!!!
Hope virat Pacifies manvi!!!
Can't wait 4 the next update!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Anu, anotherrr awesomeee and beautifulll pieceee..!!!

Ahhh im hooked! just reading one story after another :P FOBLL

-Luv Pari

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

wow!!!! amazing update!!! 👏virat nd manvi shared der pain wid each other... haha viren nd jeevika make out in da library dat was hilarious...😆 poor manvi virat shudn't hav said lyk dat... i hope he pacifies her soon... plzzz continue soon nd thnx fr da pm😊

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Anjali

@cutiepie2244

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Great n superb update dear... thanxx 4 the pm n continue soon...😊😊

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MadhuChowdary

@MadhuChowdary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

hey anu...again sorry for late comment...it was good...first phase friendship has started...now what...update soon...thanks for the pm and take care...