Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella - Page 21

wonderful update
loved it
viraat is falling for her
cant wait for the next update
thanks a lot for the pm
please continue soon

Amazing yaar
Cntue soon thanks for the pm.

awsum update virat was so warriod 4 manvi dat he forgets maya he is falling 4 her n new twist manvi's mom suffering 4rm cancerupdate soon n thnx 4 d pm😊

realy cute virman bonding :) bt phr se cancer aa gya? oh no yar

Hey anu...sorry for the late comment...awesome update as usual...seems like virat is falling for her...the way he understands her was something good to read...manvi's mom and cancer...now it makes sense...hope manvi realizes her mistake soon...thanks for the pm and take care sweety...

Time to write smethng...though i m still out of words bt lets try...ummm wow! How u showed virats concern for manvi when she was going out wid sunny! I like tis caring virat alot <3...beginning was so cute...the way he was searching for manvi everywhere n was going irritatd when she wasnt talking to hm! Like the dialogues in tis whole scene even those he was thnking! Ms. Hot head n all! Their reaction the situations were too realistic,hehehe i was laughng the way virat was flattering her n doing tareef of her dish though he didnt even has a clue what it is actually n then how manvi shovd it all in dustbin! Wohooo Manvi i like the attitude han!*winks*
Then cmes *enough is enough* scene where he almost lost hs patience n grabbed her hand n askd her what happend then the way she snappd at hm saying WATCH ME was again a whistle blowing scene...yipeee my kutta cmes again in a frame...hs barking signalling virat abt smethng abt to mishappen scares the hell out of me, seriously! I cn imagine my vilu...in reckless n helpless state*sighs* (ok focus on story afshan)
Urgh sunny is such b****** , pervert man how the hell he want to enforce him on manvi such a loser i say...bt thankgod everythng ends well as manvi's saviour was there to rescue...then collg morning class scene was typical manvish!
Lunch time scene was everythng it has comic emotion sentiments i mean everythng u hav potrayed in that particular scene thats why i love tis one in whole update! They dept of their friendship n bond was seen here i myself get little carried away wid tis!
Omg omg hav i read it litteraly is my virat falling for her *jumping like a clown* lovd the realisation virat has felt when he thnks like that wid her he doesnt hav to pretend or nythng he cn b hmself is so dam cute! Bolt i want to say many thngs abt tis particular thngs n i m nt able to i mean virats guilt,manvis apology,then virat gvng her the taste of her own medicine by nt going for cricket thngie then their banter! N yeah orange thng was most rofling thng oh crap manvis questionare was ...(couldnt find gud word fr it...its just pure straight frm both of their hearts)
The ending was out of blue man! I cnt even imagine in my wildest dream u cn bring such a twist! Manvis mum having cncer! Oh god no plz she loves her too much...thats why she was sent her,i cnt imagine how manvi will go thru tis though i m 200% sure virat will there for her bt still! Bt u knw what i trust u cmpletely i knw u will display tis phase also extra-ordinary,their bond may also get deepend!
Crap the thng whch i have to mention first i m doing it last (see tis i cnt frame nythng gud) bt dude ths whole chap was Virat i mean my Virats POV whch so awesme,fantablously too gud! We cme to knw virats feeling in tis whole chap n i love it to the core!
P.S i refraind myself to cmment on ur writing cz i dnt deserve to judge such a great art n comment!
P.P.S anu i m telling show tis story of urz to any productin house n ask them to make serial on tis bt NIA n KUSHAL will play VIRMAN!
P.P.P.S do i hav to tell u whats Umbrella is to me, nah i thnk u knw! Winks
My Bolt Blue :* keep writing such magnificent chapterz!

😊Awesome update CONTINUE soon im waiting