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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
tanhai....
after one week
arjun:gauri mujhe tumse eik favour chaiye
gauri:arjun tum kaho to....u know tumhari kisi baat ka mein inkar nahin karsakti
arjun:hope so
gauri:to kya baat he
arjun:tum.....
gauri:ha(looking at arjun)
arjun:politics se resighn kardo
gauri:(shocked)
arjun:mujhe to yeh profession kabhi se bhi nahin pasand tha
gauri:confused looks)
arjun:gauri phir kya socha
gauri:arjun, yeh tum kya keh rehe ho, tum jante ho keh mein aisa nahin karsakti
arjun:gauri jo tumhare saat hua he uske baad bhi tum.....i thought that this will change ur mind
gauri:arjun yeh sub to hota hi rehta he aur zindigi aur mot to uppar wale keh haath mein he
arjun:gauri woh sub theek he....par jo tumhare saat hua he ho sakta he kal ko woh mere saat ya aashi keh saat
gauri:arjun bus......aur kuch mat kaho
arjun:gauri tum nahin samajh rahi ho
gauri:arjun mein politics se nahin resighn karoon ge aur yeh mera aakhri faisla he
arjun:(having tears in his eyes)to phir mera bhi eik faisla he
gauri:(serious)
arjun:jub tak tum apna faisla badlo ge nahin mein aur aashi yahan is ghar mein nahin rehe ge
gauri:(shocked)
arjun:(went outside the room)
gauri:(tears in her eyes)
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22


oh! no he leftthe house!! but anyways again the update was quick and asuusal very nice 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
i decided to post the latest update but so slow response, where r my fan fic readers?
hello where r all of u 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
tanhai.......
AFTER A WEEK
gauri:(starring at sky)kyun arjun tum kyun chale gaye, tum jante the...keh...
gauri's father:gauri
gauri:papa aap
papa:kis se baatein kar rahi thi
gauri:(hug his father)papa(crying)
papa:gauri kya hua beta
gauri:i miss aashi and ................................................arjun too
papa:bete tum apna faisla kyun nahin badal leti
gauri:papa yeh aap keh rehe hein
papa:bete jub rishte kamzor parne lagte hein to koi sacrifice karni parti he
gauri:no papa..........................aaj aap mujhe apne papa nahin lag rehe
papa:(laugh)ha bete aaj mein tumhe yeh nasheet eik baap ki haseet se nahin eik maa ban kar keh raha hoon
gauri:(thinking)
AT NIGHT
gauri:(calling at arjun's appartment)hello!
kaka:gauri betiya
gauri:kaka aashi kaha he
kaka:betiya yahi he
gauri:kaka reciver uske paas lejayenge
kaka:kyun nahin betiya
gauri:aashi( in tears)
aashi:mama
gauri:(still in tears)meri jaan.....
aashi:mama....mama(happily saying)
arjun:(suspiously looking at aashi)
gauri:bete mujhe aap buhat yaad aati hein aur ................................apke papa bhi
arjun:(listening to gauri,silent)
gauri:par apke papa ko to mera koi ihsaas he nahin,(wiping her tears).............bete apna khoob masti karna aur papa ko tang mat karna(disconnect the phone)crying
arjun:(sad)
aashi:papa mama ka phone tha
arjun:(hold aashi)ha bete apki mama ka phone tha
ON TELEVISION
reporter:haal hi mein hamare desh ki neta mrs gauri goenka par eik hamla hua, police ne tafteesh shoori ke aur pata chala keh yeh hamla jo mrs gauri goenka par hua yeh j mantri ke karkoonon ki saazish thi, jiske bais government ne pradhan ji ki party ko agle elections tak ban kardiya he
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
ON ROAD SIDE
gauri:driver jaldi ghar chalo
driver:madam traffic gem he
gauri:(feeling not well)kuch karo, meri halat buhat kharab ho rahi he
driver:madam, mein dekhta hu
gauri:(behosh)
driver:madam.....madam
ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE DOUBLE ROAD
arjun:(in car)gauri ki car, yeh driver bahir kya kar raha he(come out of the car)
driver:sahab madam ko pata nahin mya ho geya he aur traffic bhi gem he
arjun:(take gauri out of the car)
AT HOSPITAL
doctor:congratulations, gauri maa banane wali he
arjun:(ver happy)
IN ROOM
arjun:(come inside the room)
gauri:(looking at him)arjun, tum chahte the na keh mein politics chor doon, .....................................(in sad voice)maine chor de, kyunki mere liye tumse aur asshi se bardh kar koi nahin he
arjun:(surprised)gauri............ab eik aur mehmaan ane wala he jo keh tumhari yehi chahat chahta he
gauri:(confused)
arjun:(happily looking at gauri)
DOOR OPENED
sooraj:(carrying teddy bear)
gauri:bhaiya.....(laugh) yeh aap kya leh kar aye hein
manasvi:sooraj tum yeh doosra teddy bear yahi bhool gaye ho
sooraj:oh thanks
gauri:bhabi aap bhi........yeh kya ho raha he
manasvi:acha janab to ab humse he poocha ja raha he yeh kya ho raha he
arjun:gauri tum eik baar phir maa banane wali ho
gauri:kya(happy)
manasvi:congratulations gauri
gauri:thanks bhabi
sooraj:aur yeh teddy bear us ane wale mehmaan keh liye advance mein
gauri:(laugh,looking at arjun)
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
there is much more to come , something very intresting,keep reading it
and tunna where r u? didnt see u for a week
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
awwwww zeenish !!!!!!!!! that was sooooooooooooo........
👏

this is for the fabulous story.....!!!!

n this is for my not checking up 😭


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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
but really yaar...this is going sooooooooo lovely... i want more n more... wn\anna c wat happens next with gauri...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
waiting for the next update zeenish aka river 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
TANHAI........
AFTER SEVEN MONTHS
AT SOORAJ HOUSE
manasvi:papa shimla mein dadi buhat bemar hein aur dadi ki khawahish he keh mein unse millo
sooraj's father:bete waise farz to hum sub ka banta he ke hum jaye, par tum to janti ho keh iswaqt jub party keh halat aise hey keh jana buhat mushkil he
manasvi:papa mein samajhti hoo.......bus mujhe aapse ijazat leni the keh mein ho ayoon
papa:bete sooraj aur tum ho ayo
manasvi:papa actually sooraj ki foreighn meeting he unhon ne toh balke cancel bhi kardi thi par maine mana kar diya
papa:bete par..... tumhe ab akela toh nahin bhejna........aur ab gauri aise halat mein he keh usko bhi main nahin bhej sakta
manasvi:(sadly)phir papa.....
papa:are yaad aya ......tumne kub jana he bus eik do din mein.....theke arjun se meri baat hui thi to usne mujhse yahin kahin shimla keh aas paas jane ka zikr kiya tha.....arjun se kahoon ga keh woh tumhe bhi saat le jaye
manasvi:(happily)thanks papa
papa:ur welome bete!
AFTER TWO DAYS
IN THE PORCH
papa:manasvi bete dadi ko kehna keh mein jald unse milne ayoon ga
sooraj:apna kyahyal rakhna aur phone karti rehna
manasvi:ok
arjun:ok uncle! phir chalte hein
papa:arjun beta tumhari phir kitne dinoon baad wapsi ho ge
arjun:uncle waise toh eik hafte ka visit he phir ho sakta he keh zaada din bhi lag jaye , phir mein bhabi ko shimla se lete hua he ayoon ga
papa:ok bete! best of luck
arjun:thanks uncle! bye
sooraj:bye bye!
AFTER ONE WEEK AT SHIMLA
IN CAR
manasvi:arjun tumne papa ko phone kardiya tha na
arjun:yeh bhabi !
manasvi:dadi tumse milkar buhat khush hui thi
arjun:waise bhabi ur dadi is really very sweet
manasvi:yeh i know(laughing)
IN MUMBAI
AT SOORAJ HOUSE
sooraj:(on phone)hello!
anonymous:ji mein shimla keh eik hospital se bol raha hoon, eik car ka accident ho geya tha , wahin se humay pata chala yahan keh phone number ka, apka koi janane wala yahan par aya hua tha
sooraj:shocked.............................................. ..........................(phone disconnect)
papa:sooraj kiska phone tha
sooraj:papa arjun aur manasvi jis car mein the uska accident ho geya he
gauri:(shocked)arjun!(get fainted)
papa:gauri bete annkein kholo
sooraj:gauri get up!
gauri:papa mein aap logon keh saat challon ge hosp.........
papa:bete tumhari halat aise nahin he keh tum chal sako
gauri:par.......(faint)
AT SHIMLA HOSPITAL
doctor:inke halat buhat kharab he aur jo sahab inke saat the woh.........
sooraj:doctor unko kya hua he
papa:(anxiously asking)doctor what happen to him
doctor:woh bach nahin sake, he is no more
sooraj:(tears in his eyes)
papa:yeh nahin ho sakta........yeh kaise ho sakta he


to be continued.....

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