***TANHAI......*** - Page 2

AFTER TWO and a half YEARS
gauri:are meri jaan to aap yahan hein?
ashi:mama aap dhoond leti hein mujhe aur papa woh mujhe dhoondh he nahin pate.
gauri:meri pyari se beti papa darasal na........
arjun:he he he yeh kya horaha he , papa ki burai
ashi:papa.......aaj disney park jaye ge na
arjun:(thinking)
aashi:papa...........
arjun:(laugh)ha bete hum sub jaye ge
gauri:(smiling)


gauri:(wearing maroon sari)
arjun:looking pretty
gauri:so janab tareef ho gaye ho to chaley(mobile rings)
arjun:(annoying expressions)
gauri:(look at him)nahin mein abhi nahin a sakti,kal office mein a jaye jaga
arjun:(look at gauri with smile)
aashi:papa chaley bhi
arjun:ha bete chalo
IN THE OFFICE
assistant:madam aaj kal halat buhat kharab hein,mujhe pradhan ji ki irade neek nahin lag rehe
gauri:yeh aap kya keh rehe hein
assistant:madam aap muhtat rehe
gauri:(pareshan)
IN THE CARNIVAL
gauri:aap logon se request he ke humara tawun karey kyunki.........(a bullet struck gauri)
people shouting, rushing here and there
gauri:(eyes closed)arjun................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ ......

oh!! no gauri's shot!!nahin....plz make her well soon

And u updated very soon!! and nice ......u took a leap very soon ......but the ff is really nice and as i said before its different
😊

arrey what's wrong 😭 ?no no it can't happened.but gr8 update 👏 👏

heyi river... (tho i know u dont like this name )
ur alltime fan is here 😃

but wats this going on...... they married...too good👏
but gauri shot !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very bad.....
waiting to c her get well soon.... very soon.........

in btwn very nicely written as usual yaar👏

AT HOSPITAL
gauri:(in operation theater)
sooraj:(speaking to the press)jinhon ne yeh kiya hai , woh yeh na soche ke police

untak nahin phonch saki ge
press:apko kis par shak hei
sooraj:filhal kuch nahin kaha jasakta
arjun:(carrying aashi)crying
gauri's father:(remembering gauri's childhood)
aashi:papa mama ko kya hua he
arjun:(looking at aashi)bete kuch nahin, mama bilkul theek he eik mamooli se chot aye

he
sooraj:aashi bete mere paas ajao
arjun:(giving aashi to sooraj)
arjun:(remembering gauri)
doctor:miss gauri ka operation ho geya, shukar he ki goli dil ke pass se guzar

gaye,warna unke jaan bhi ja sakti thi
arjun:doctor gauri kaise he
doctor:now she is ok
arjun:thank god
AFTER SOMETIME
AT HOSPITAL ROOM
gauri:(on bed)
asshi:mama.....mama
gauri:are mere jaan tum
arjun:(looking at gauri)feeling better
gauri:ha
sooraj:bhena tumne to dara he diya tha, janti ho papa kitne pareshan hogeye the
gaui's father:bete tum janti ho tum meri taqat ho aur aaj jub maine tumhare bare mein

suna to yun laga keh koi meri taqat mujhse cheen raha he
gauri:papa(crying)
arjun:uncle i think now she should take rest
(everyone going)
gauri:(cauhgt arjun's hand)arjun
arjun:(smiles)gauri take rest

Originally posted by: tunna

heyi river... (tho i know u dont like this name )
ur alltime fan is here 😃

but wats this going on...... they married...too good👏
but gauri shot !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very bad.....
waiting to c her get well soon.... very soon.........

the fiction is not all about to happen good things, to keep the intrest of the readers, such things has to be happen😉

and its nice to hear tunna that u r my fan😛

Zeenish I read all the parts and I like it very much.Nice work 👏 👏

see ur fan again here... to read the update... 😃 😃 😃
n rocking update... 👏
good things in end... wanting to c wat more probs she can have...
n waiting to c strong suraj role... i guess this ff doesnt demand...
but one special request zeenish... 😳 😳 plzzz can u write next one... with suraj.. nice role... i like ur storylines always... very different... so plzz... next one... suraj ka... 😃

hey
thats a very good and different one and as usual superb and very nice 👏