***TANHAI......***

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TANHAI......
AT GAURI'S HOUSE
servant:madam koi sahab aap se milne aye hai
gauri:acha andar bheejo
arjun:gauri.....
gauri:(surprised,looking at him)arjun tum
arjun:tum bhooli nahin
gauri:tumhe bhoolna itna asaan kaam nahin hai
arjun:bethne ko nahin kahoon ge
gauri:oh, betho na
arjun:tum to mujhe bhool he gaye thi na koi phone na koi mail
gauri:tum london se kub wapas aye
arjun:to janab ko ab khyal aya he
gauri:arjun darasal politics mein itni busy ho gaye hoon ke time ka bhi pata nahin chalta
arjun:jub mein geya tha to tumse eik sawal kiya tha, tumhe yaad he
gauri:(looking at him)arjun........tum coffee logena
arjun:(laugh)iska matlab yaad he.......
gauri:(nervous)
arjun:ha coffeee loonga
OPPOSITION
j mantri:yeh gauri hamare liye buhat mushkal ban rahe he
pradhan:humay mushkalen door karna aata he
j mantri:par pradhan ji.....
pradhan:mein keh raha hoon na.........keh humay mushkalein door karna aata he
j mantri:ji.........
AFTER A WEEK
at phone
arjun:gauri mein keh raha hoon na, tum eik baar to udhar ka khana khao
gauri:arjun.......meri meeting he
arjun:theke to hum der se chaley ge
gauri:lagta he buhat faarigh hote ho
arjun:(laugh)bus mein a raha hoon
gauri:ok(laugh)
AT HOTEL
gauri:such mein khana to buhat maaze ka tha
arjun:khana to hogeya.....ab....
gauri:ab kya.....
arjun:dance
gauri:arjun....now i will not do that
arjun:plzzzzzzz......
gauri:eik to pata nahin tumhe mein inkaar kyun nahin kar pati
arjun:shaid isi wajah ne hum donon ko paas rakha hua he
gauri:(looking at him)chalo lets go for dance
arjun:(dancing on ayo na from kyun ho geya na)looking at gauri
gauri:(thinking of the moment when arjun asked her before going to london whether she would merry him)
arjun:(still looking at her)
gauri:(smiles)
ON MORNING
gauri:(remembering the yesterday night dinner which she spent with arjun)(looking very happy)
assistant:madam yeh aaj ka newspaper
gauri:kya hua......
assistant:madam aap khudi dekh ley
gauri:(the newspaper has pics of arjun and gauri dancing with wrong headlines)shocked

(thinking of her papa what he had said)beta mein tum par apne se bhi zaada
bharosa karta hoon

AT ARJUN'S HOUSE
gauri:arjun aaj ke baad na tum mujhe miloo ge na mein tumhe
arjun:par gauri
gauri:nahin arjun.....yeh jo sub kuch ho raha he yeh theek nahin he
arjun:(looking at him)
gauri:(at door)jahan tak us sawal ki baat he jo tumne mujhese kabhi kiya tha , acha hoga agar tum us sawal ke akhir mein fullstop laga do(tears in her eyes)(went)
arjun:gauri,u dont know how much i love u(say to himself)

TANHAI......
at phone
sooraj:(shouting)gauri yeh sub kuch kya hei newspaper mein, tum election campain

chala rahi ho, whats happening ha.... tell me
gauri:bhaiya u know when election r going on, opposition do all these things
sooraj:bhena then call the press and tell them about all this, istarah to warna tumhari

reputation kharab ho ge
gauri:ok i will call the press, bye
AT PRESS
reporter:is this true that u and...
gauri:listen, i hv called this press to tell u whats right and whats wrong, so plzzzzz first

listen me, there is nothing at all between mr arjun and me, he was my college friend

and he invited me for dinner as he came back from london after 1and a half years,and

all this situation was picturized wrongly
reporter:miss gauri what do u think who can do this?
gauri:(laugh)u should know better then me that who can do this
AT DELHI
hemant khandelwal:oh dear u r here, elections ki tayarian ho gaye
gauri:yeh papa,aaj hi aye hoon calcutta se,the response was nice
papa:aur beta kaisa laga yeh experience
gauri:nice but its really very difficult
papa:aur tumne press ko us news ke bare mein such bata diya na
gauri:......yeh
papa:kya hua
gauri:nothing papa
papa:gauri mein tumhara dad hu, mujhe batao kya baat he
gauri:papa..............jo pics aye thi woh sub kuch such tha, yaad he mere college ka ik

friend tha arjun, woh eik saal pehle london chala geya tha, abhi kuch urse pehle he

wapas aya he, jub woh ja raha tha to usne mujhe propose kiya tha par maine kuch

nahin kaha tha kyunki mujhe laga keh woh waqt sahi nahin tha ab phir...........
papa:usne tumhe propose kiya he
gauri:(looking at papa)yeh
papa:tumne kya kaha
gauri:papa mein buhat upset thi isliye maine kaha keh ab yeh baat age nahin barh

sakti
papa:gauri politics mein kabhi bhi itni involve na ho jana keh apni personal life keh

bare mein bhool he jao
gauri:par papa aise waqt mein, jub elections sir par hein to mein kya karti
papa:bete duniya ke kam saat saat chalte jaate hein, arjun se baat karo........
gauri:par papa....
papa:bete maine keh diya na
gauri:(smiles)
AT ROOM
gauri:arjun ko phone karti hoon, voice mail.....arjun ki
arjun 's voice mail
gauri shaid mein tumhari buhat bari tension tha, iski wajah se tumhara

career kharab ho raha tha par aaj mujhe apne sawal ka jawab milgeya he keh hum

dono ke beech mehz eik taqaluf tha, tumhare dil mein mere liye kabhi bhi kuch nahin

tha, isliye sorry, mein london wapas ja raha hoon,bye

my god... now thats not nice yaar... !!!!!! how can he go back !!!!!!!!!!!
i mean ofcours very well written... but....
waiting to c wat happens with gauri... 😕

AFTER THREE MONTHS
gauri:mr sherma , well its difficult to come in the party, aur waise bhi jub se elections

mein jeet hoi he tub se koi din aisa nahin he jub mein kisi party mein na gaye hoon
mr sherma:miss gauri mein yeh nahin janta apko ana hi ho ga
gauri:bhaiya aap, aap kaise aye
sooraj:papa ne bheja he, hy mr sherma, aap yahan par
mr sherma:bhai inko invite kar raha hoon koi pandra minute se, par yeh party par ane

par manti he nahin he
sooraj:gauri ab yeh itna israar kar rehe hein to chali jao na
gauri:bhaiya ab aap bhi, ok to raat ko aath baje milen ge
AT PARTY
mr sherma:are gauri so u r here
gauri:bhai aana to tha he na
mr sherma:come with me, mein apko kuch apne family friends se milwata hoon
gauri:lets go, oh no merea phone hein, mein ate hoon(on phone)hello!yeh no i will come

at 10 o' clock,ok,bye...........ARJUN................tum yahan(happily)
arjun:(surprised)gauri....
gauri:tumne to jaise naata he torr liya ho, jante ho aaj tumhe dekh kar mein buhat

khush hoon kyunki eik baat aise thi jisko kehne keh liye mein teen maheene se intezar

kar rahi hoon,jante ho woh kya baat he(having emotions of love in her eyes)
arjun:(looking at her)
gauri:i want to merry u
arjun:(shocked)
shefali:are gauri tum yahan
gauri:shefali, hye aaj kal kya kar rahi ho
shefali:woh sub choro, pehle yeh batao keh mere pheonce keh saat kya baatein kar

rahi thi
gauri:(shocked)
shefali:oh just joking
arjun:(looking at gauri)
gauri:(looking at arjun with tears in eyes)
shefali:oh papa ne bulaya he, mein ate hoon
gauri:congratulations!
arjun:gauri....
gauri:arjun baad mein milte hein(went outside)
IN THE GARDEN OF MR SHERMA
gauri:(starring at sky)
arjun:gauri mein samajhta tha keh tumne kabhi mujhse pyar kiya he nahin, isliye maine

mama se keh diya keh woh jahan chahti hein meri shaadi karwa dein
gauri:arjun........i m really very happy for u, aakhir kon kisi kh liye itne urse intezaar

karta he
arjun:par gauri yeh such he keh tum se mein buhat pyar karta tha.....ya ab bhi karta

hoon
gauri:(having tears in her eyes)deer maine he kardi tum se izhar mein

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.........................shefali
arjun:shocked
shefali:(looking at both of them)
arjun:shefali....woh....
gauri:(staring the floor)
shefali:arjun mein baaz dafa sochti thi keh tum mere saat hote hua bhi mere saat

nahin hote the , aaj mujhe uska jawab milgeya, gauri.........shaid meri aur arjun ki jodi

kabhi bani hi nahin thi.............(take her ring out)yeh lo arjun sagai ki anghooti yeh mere

haath keh liye kabhi bhi nahin thi
arjun:(shocked)shefali yeh kya kar rahi ho
shefali:arjun meri fikr mat karo........(went inside)
IN THE ROOM
shefali:(crying)
to be continued....

wow!! superb!! nice...... 👏
achcha hua shefali ne engagement ring wapas de di!! 👏