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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

This was a beautiful update!

I liked the way you din't rush things after Arnav and Dhruv reconciled..The pace of the story was excellent...

Khushi is a sweetheart..No wonder she became Dhruv's favorite person..

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namrata22796

@namrata22796

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

PERFECT...jst in one word 'perfect'. :-)
the bhabi-dewar relationship got a new definition in ur ff.
but u introducd arshi's kids here right? Does dat mean dat in ur new os series dat u used 2 rite wud contain dem? I mean wnt we get 2 read mre fluffs dat wud nt contain dis storyline?:-|
i equally luvd dose OS-s, nd wud luv 2 c a pregnant arshi latr.:-)

But still loved the journey...loads of hugs...🤗
Hope u wud keep my request...

Edited by namrata22796 - 12 years ago

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

This was an amazing story. So glad i got to read all of it, although I'm very sad that it's ending.

You are a really great writer and your concept is so unique.

Can't wait to read more of your work!

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A_R_S

@A_R_S

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

As always an amazing and wonderful update. Beautifully told by you how the two brothers cleared their problem with the help of Khushi and also the reactions of each other family member regarding this event.

Loved following scenes very much:
- Khushi feeling heartbreak as she thinks she will have to sleep seperate from Arnav due his anger and then Arnav's response, wonderful
- Arnav remembering his promise made to his dear wife Khushi, showed how much he respects and loves his wife
- Arnav asking Khushi to stay with him when he is going to Face Dhruv and Khushi's response 'Hamesha', awesome

And a wonderful ending also of a story, which was supossed to be an OS and turned out one the most wonderful, awesome and amazing SS I have read, especially the emotions and feelings of all the characters were described so beautifully.

Keep it up, will follow ur works in future also. All the best.

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

After reading this bit i was getting agitated that you might not be writing anymore but phew you're YAY!

Coming back to the update what a long and awesome update

I'd give you a hug if i could 🤗 this was amazing!

The way Arnav gave his brother the chance and the way the family tried not to react was difficult for them but amazing as well..

Dhruv & Khushi teaming up was so cute, Khushi becoming his favourite person is justified and so cute

The last bit was just soo perfect, I was speechless!

Great update 👏

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

It was wonderfully long , just as you promised , and I loved it ...

You know I adore your Arnav and Khushi , their love is so deep and so complete and just so soul satisfying that ...well it is difficult to explain since I am no wordsmith ...

Suffice it to say that I love what you write and how you write it an I am so very happy that you plan to share your fascination for Shantivan and its inhabitants in the form of more such vignettes ...'cause we're always waiting to read more ...

The Dhruv saga has made for a lovely read and you've brought it to a very beautiful conclusion not only in the mending of broken relationships but also in the knitting together of a brand new one between a Devar and Bhabhi ...

I'll shut up now ...until your next update ...

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

happen to stumble on your FF/SS/OS and loved it! Beautifully built up story that was such a pleasure to read that as I got closer to the ned I started to slow down my reading cos I didn't want it to end!

And I must compliment you on one thing - without describing anything intimate or physical, yo os beautifully portrayed the love that exists between the two. I could actually feel the bond and closeness between Arnav & Khushi as I read the story. Well done!