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I was going to post a complaining comment for keeping us waiting so long, and then I saw the update today. And once again, you delivered above expectations. It was really beautiful. I loved the progression in the story. It was such a feel-good end to a very beautifully written story.
The best thing about your writing is that you stick very closely to the real characters on the show. So I find it easy to relate , and I really get the feeling I am watching the show. And to top it all, you actually make the characters more sensible than they were sometimes shown to be on the show. Anjali , for instance, is so much more sensible in your world, than she was on the show. And Mami! Love how her relationship with Khushi developed. I am sure we would have seen that if the show had continued.
Payal should send you a special thank you note. She actually is a person in your world, as opposed to being a piece of furniture. 😆
I adored the special relationship Khushi shared with NK, and now you made the Dhruv-Khushi relationship even more special.
I was tickled reading the ending, with the kids. How many are they going to have? 😉
I would have loved this FF to keep going on and on, but you did do full justice to it and wrapped it up beautifully. So no complaints. Now looking forward to the other OSs and SSs or whatever else you have planned for us.
The best thing about your writing is that you stick very closely to the real characters on the show. So I find it easy to relate , and I really get the feeling I am watching the show. And to top it all, you actually make the characters more sensible than they were sometimes shown to be on the show. Anjali , for instance, is so much more sensible in your world, than she was on the show. And Mami! Love how her relationship with Khushi developed. I am sure we would have seen that if the show had continued.
Payal should send you a special thank you note. She actually is a person in your world, as opposed to being a piece of furniture. 😆
I adored the special relationship Khushi shared with NK, and now you made the Dhruv-Khushi relationship even more special.
I was tickled reading the ending, with the kids. How many are they going to have? 😉
I would have loved this FF to keep going on and on, but you did do full justice to it and wrapped it up beautifully. So no complaints. Now looking forward to the other OSs and SSs or whatever else you have planned for us.
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