Vignettes -12. From ... , with love

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Arooma

@Bubbles76

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#611

hey dear ... sorry for late commenting was hell busy with office work ... but i read ur story in between office work 😛 .. wat to do cant stay away from it ... i really really LOOOVVV ur story ... u r such a wonderful writer ... i love the way you use very character of IPK in ur story not only Arshi ... 👏

i really love the way how khushi made arnav talk to dhruv and then brothers touching hug and how arnav feels that khushi is the connecting link who connects him with the other .. i just so love the fact that arnav have changed due to khushi ... as i always wanted to see that changed arnav in the show which i didnt get to see that much but thank u so much for giving us that arnav and khushi who will do anything to make her husband life bueatifull and want to fill his life wid happiness ... i love how dhruv got attach to khhushi ... and how he send the post cards to khushi ...its so very lovly and cute ... i wish u wudnt have end it ... but as its ur story u know it better ...

big big big HUG 🤗 to you for writing such wonderful stories for us ... 😉

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Shinja

@Rainbow_petals

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Waiting for nxt part..
Update soon

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abby2181

@abby2181

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#613

I was one of the silent readers you so abhor mainly because I have been extremely busy with work and was catching each update on my phone (I could not bear to miss one). Reading on the phone unfortunately limits my typing skills so decided to write a lengthy comment when I get the time. Here goes...

I loved every one of the OS's thus far, but was apprehensive when I started the Dhruv series wondering just how you would handle it. I should say you left me more than pleasantly surprised. Your writing has always been of very good quality but the narration in the series was simply superb. The plot was well structured, the flow seamless. The character development was consistent and not OTT. The emotions were beautifully described and I love how beautifully you blend emotions in a scene.

My favourite feature of your writing is how subtly you mention the little things (the glances, the touches. Things taken for granted in a relationship) without rambling on.

All in all, loved all your work so far and hope you continue writing. I will definitely continue reading your work.

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#614

You have written very well

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sher_lock

@sher_lock

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#615

you write wonderfully well. keep going..!!👏

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

Hey ...

Wonderful update :)

Loved it :)

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ardy03

@ardy03

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

hey, got across your fanfiction just yesterday.you know I an one of those readers who neither comment nor is one shots fan.you know what I never used to read one shots.I had a feeling that when one reads them the story ends before it starts our it is somewhere incomplete.but you made me change my notion.your story has a balance has a life.when I read it I felt as if I was present there witnessing these things.somewhere deep inside I had even wanted to witness this easy and loveable relationship. I am so badly connected.I have read various stories even the best of this forum but I must say what you evoke through this none of them had been able to.a perfect setting, a perfect understanding.thank you for such a good piece.I am not one of those people who comment regularly so I won't ask you to pm me.I will follow anyway.but just thank you you for writing such a piece which made me feel as if I am one of those third persons standing there witnessing the scenes.

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#618

Congratulations for finishing this wonderful story. No doubt it was one of the finest piece written on this forum. From Dhruv's guilt to Khushi's wonderful idea to Arnav's pain, description of each & every emotion was amazing 😊