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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part
it touched my heart completely
the way you showed every relationship was just awesome
ARNAV & KHUSHIs is bond is lovely as usual
specially DHRUVs & KHUSHIs relationship
you wrote it beautifully
you're an fabulous writer
thank you for writing vignettes
am really looking forward to your next OS/SS/FF
am sad that it ended today
Edited by tushi0310 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
A Surprise Update ..and a long one..Awesome
After reading the ending ...the title seems so apt. . The whole story was conceptualized so well , right down from Dhruv's entry, to the spat and how it gets gradually resolved.

All I can tell you that for avid readers , this series looks like IPK never stopped airing. Even if it plays out only in our mind.

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Posted: 12 years ago
U know, something in me told me that you would be updating today and so you did. I'm stoked.
Thnk u
And for this last part, YOu definitely couldn't have done it better!
I'm glad someone took up Druv's character and turned into into a completely unique and hooking SS.
And desperately looking forward to your OSs, FFs and SSs.
You rock sista!
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was wonderful.. 👏

It really brought out Arnav and Khushi's bond so well!! 😊
Dhruv came across as an very caring and interesting character by the end.. 😉

p.s. Sad it ended!! 😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a fabulous ending👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely!
This part was a roller coaster ride of HUGE emotions!
😊
Thats what I felt 😛
Anyhow, it was fantastic, emotional, amazing, super, awesome... and everything! 😃
Excellent one!
But what's with the 12th Vignette?😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
a story awesome till its end.loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all, hugs and kisses to you... 😳

Second of all, thankz for such an amazing OS/SS/FF whatever it is... It was so endearing, you kept all the members of Shantivan in their elements, just as we remember them in the show, and yet build up upon them just like i wanted them to be in the show! the new additions like Dhruv, Payal's character build-up, Khushi's love for FB, Pratheeksha, Dr. Khurana... They all felt so natural, all of them did. So, Thankz again, for the wonderful story. 👏 👏 👏

You asked for a lengthy comment, so here goes:

"Unaware of all that had transpired in their absence, all Anjali knew was that Khushiji had managed to thaw the ice between the brothers as planned and being a party to the plan, Anjali was requird to ensure that no one in the family makes a big deal out of it and ruin whatever semblance of normalcy that had returned to their relationship."
This is SOOO considerate of you!!! Exactly acting like an elder sister should... This is what we expect from Anjali...

Payal reached out to squeeze her husband's hand, knowing what torture he had been under, torn between his two brothers. Looking down at his wife with moist eyes, Akash sighed, hope flickering to life in his heart for the first time in years.
Again nice and very thoughtful of you! I really like that you pay attention to tiny details in the story like this. This story is not just Arnav-Khushi Romance, it's about a big family... exactly what was lacking in the show.

Khushi turned to Anjali with a delighted grin, while shaking her head slightly, warning her not to make any comment. Nodding her understanding, Anjali walked upstairs..
LOVED this relationship!

LOVED Payal-Arnav chat

Anjali realised that she was going ahead with her decision to make the brothers talk and immediately turned to the mandir...
Good use of Anjali's craze for Pooja.. I know people called her 'Poojali' and a totally useless sister in the show, but it doesn't always need to be that way, isn't it? People find peace in different things. Anjali in her Poojas, Khushi in Jalebis, Arnav in gardening...

Nani and Mami looked at eachother, Devyani Singh Raizada moving over to hold the shaking hand of her daughter-in-law.
Loved how you bring out Mami Jaan's emotional side...

Not looking for a response from his brother, he plowed on, his entire being focussed solely on the iron grip with which his Bhabi held him up...
You had me close to tears at this point... *hugs*

"I am living my dream, Dhruv...it's just that you were too young to understand it when my dreams changed...I just dreamed up new ones!"
LOVED this!! Somehow, i didnt like Arnav as a botanist... Glad that he hasn't lost his dream career for responsibilities, he's jst had new dreams!

Seeing her come out, Manorama rushed up to her, her anticipation fairly making her tremble. Hugging her Mamiji tightly, Khushi whispered, "Thank s be to Devi Maiyya, Mamiji...It's alright now...Everything's going to be fine now..."
Oh... LOVED this phatti saari - Mami Jaan Duo!!


The weeks that followed were ones filled with laughter - the roaring laughs that Akash and Dhruv had at the expense of their indignant mother, the quiet chuckles that Manohar and his mother shared as they watched Dhruv enjoying teasing his Di, Payal's gentle laugh as she continually played peacekeeper between Akash and Dhruv, and a whiny NK who ran complaining to her each time the first two made fun of his Hindi, and above all, the contented smile of Arnav as he stood witness to the incredible bond that had developed between his wife and his kid brother.
Totally loved this part!...On second thought, may be I'm a sucker for happy-family scenarios?

Romaanchkaari..!!??!!! ROFLMAO indeed!!!

TOTALLY LOVED the last part - To Bahabhi, with love from Dhruv...

You must be tired of reading this by now, but i feel incomplete without adding this to my rant... How I wish that the show was still on air, and all these were actually in the show... 😭

Waiting eagerly for the next OS. Are you planning to post them only Mondays and Fridays? I really hope that you could post them sooner. but fantasies aside, work comes first, i understand.

Love Ya! 😳


Edited by aruni50218 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
The whole story is like a beautiful dream continuing after abrupt end of the serial... 👏 awsome
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Posted: 12 years ago

I am so sad this ended, but it was so beautifully composed, everything Khushi , ever the peacemaker, would have done was incorporated, you have such a talent for grasping your readers imagination, this easily could have been a scene from the show..

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