Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#801

teeheee... this update was hilarious! especially with the punch lines.. oh god.. 'ahem ji...' and 'ji mom' and to top it off with Khushi is about to lose her mind thinking about marriage... I can't believe Payal kissed Aakash.. but they say, love makes one do everything... ;) loved the update! the story is getting really unpredictable, and I'm loving it! :)

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Sharmila

@spsharmila

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#802

Grown up Harry Potter ji 🤣 🤣

Awesome update 👏

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#803

What an update! Where did you get the idea of Aakash looking like an older version of Harry Potter? He really does resemble Potter. Kokila and Ahem saying yes Mom was hilarious. Love your Payal. She had the courage to go to meet Aakash and declare her love for him. Arnav too has seen them kissing. Things can only get crazier.

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#804

O MY GOD WHAT A HILARIOUS UPDATE.

PAYAL N THE HARRY POTTERJI .

LOVED KOKILAS POV N JII MOM.

BUT TONSIL TENNIS WAS THE BEST.

WHAT THE ARNAVS INFAMOUS REACTION.

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#805

amazing update...

i hate ahem nd his ji mom urghhh...u used it well

end of the update amazing with haaye devi maayia nd what the

i know both expressions

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#806

awesome update loved it ahem really poor payal and khushi with jigar oh god loved the bold payal loved the kiss awesome update can't wait to see what khushi and asr will do

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#807

love of her life gotas and then LG
its good he will never know that she put gotas before him or he would be so offended for sure
oh yeah where did these ladke waale come from all of a sudden
and is payal not older shouldnt she be married off first technically
yeh garima toh khushi se bhi aur zyada door ki soch rahi hain
nahin woh kissi LG ke saath nahin bhagane wali hain
well at least not for the time being
chalo they are coming to see payal
wait payal ka toh akash se tankaa bhida tha
ufff now this is turning out to be more of comedy of errors man
waise kya pata aap ko bhi dekhne aa sakte hain garima ji you dont look that old to be mother of such big daughters for sure
bechari payal there she is lost in akash's love and here ladke are coming to see her
and boy was khushi happy that it isnt her who is ladke are coming to see
harry potterji really akash compared to harry
oh teri she aint that seedhi saadhi huh well she is secretly harbouring love for some man naa
chalo about time she aint seedhi saadhi for a change
not ahem man really that guy is such momma's boy
and koki is solid hitler types of saas as you were imagining khushi
dont even go there khushi is off limits for the time being
and she has been reserved by ASR he wont be happy about this nor would she be happy about marrying jigar
arrey its arhi not what ever combo jigar and khushi would make
please khushi needs a man like arnie to keep things interesting
fire and ice sugar and spice go well not jigar and khushi
nahinnn aisa sach mein nahin ho sakta what the is going on here
how did this happen to payal and khushi
wow payal and khushi going to see akash and arnie
well i hope you guys are ready for a blast in your house by sisters gupta
this should be fun i bet
oh teri even akash seems to be smitten by payal thank god right
arrey agar aap sapne hi dekhte reh gaye naa toh ahem aapki payal ko le udenge
she kissed him okay so it was just a peck but wow man
that was gutsy there and about time she is anything but the docile payal right
akash snap out of it dude hello she wants to know about your feelings for her
oh yes baby now am sure you are ASR's brother now thats what am talking about
so khsuhis and arnie are both surprised seeing their siblings kissing each other like that
wonder what happens now
this has been the shocking most one so far i think
but am sure you guys are planning on giving us more shocks too

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Denaid

@Denaid

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#808

Too good Gabbar, I was laughing so much by the end of it, my husband started giving me weird stares...OMG, Kokila Ben and Ahem with his Ji mom...too good..

"her payal chimed for him and her gotas glittered for him" , loved it... The phrase "tonsil tennis" had me ROFL...u r just fabulous dear...