Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

So Payal thinks that Aakash looks like an older version of Harry Potter n refers him like that in her diary.😆

Your whole take on SNS with Kokila n Ahemji n their achar,fafda,theplas was hilarious🤣

Payal is quite something in this...she went all the way to Shantivan,confessed her feelings in front of Aakash n kissed him😲 and he has similar feelings for her and he kissed her too.

And so that is how Khushi with her "Devi Maiyaa" n Arnav with his "What the" saw Payal n Aakash!

Now eagerly waiting for the next update by Rafa.

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Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Hahahaha! This was just superb!! kokila, ahem and his "ji mom" and to top it off khushi's rishta???? So now that Arnav and Khushi BOTH know about this, wonder what is going to happen next??? And exactly HOW is Arnav going to react to khushi's alliance being fixed ???! Fab update... And stalking helps:)

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Hahahaah this is awesome

I already hate that Ahem Ji, he should keep his 'Ji Mom' to himself!

I wonder if now Arshi will get these love birds together

awesome update as always!!

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-memorable-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

these are my expressions too

She exclaimed 'Arrey Devi Mayya.'
Shortly she heard someone swear from a distance 'What the!'

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Skiran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

Nice update.
Ahemji ka "ji mom"🤣
Payal was awesome 😉

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roshaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

awesum update loved payal n aakash love story n wholr ahem ji n jee mon thinh was funnry payal was surprise allement ending was superd

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: madmaxine
For once, I updated without a PM from Juhi! I am proud of myself (😳) and thankful to Juhi for being such a sweetie and emailing me without fail every single time.

As for the update, I loved all the dhokla-thepla show digs. Because as everyone knows, I dig that show, next only to Balika Vadhu. Wonderful update and let's see what Rafa does next.

Also, only 8-9 chapters to go. Authors might start planning an exit strategy here. Though we need not worry about it till we have say 4-5 chapters to go.

Alrighty, have a wonderful weekend all!

Damn! I knew I forgot something! 😆

Exit strategy? Oh no, please let's not start talking about endings just yet..this is such a fun ride!

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annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#798

So the 7 o'clock family come visiting ...nice twist ...I like kokila but not for Khushi so hoping the next updater scuttles these plans .. ... And well , Payal ? ...is that Payal ? Right ! LOL !

Liked !

Thnx for the pm in advance

P.S. referencing the one above me ...comments , I mean ...I agree , it is fun , so don't talk about exit just yet please...

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ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#799

awesome update! That is so funny that Payal saw Akash has a grown up Harry Potter! lol. Wow Payal is a lot more courageous here. I'm glad she didn't waste any time and went to go see him. So finally Khushi has realized that she has some sort of feelings for Arnav. I hope she isn't forced to marry that other guy. That Kokila lady looks crazy. I'm sure he would be an annoying mother-in-law! lol. All of you are doing an amazing job on this story!