Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#781

Anyone who mentions Harry Potter and Hogwarts in whatever just makes it special.

And the "Ji Mom" guy was hilarious.

Poor Khushi and Arnav! They had to witness their siblings playing tongue hockey with each other!

A very cute update!

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#782

Wonderful update! I loved the part about Ahem and Kokila and can't believe that they liked Khushi as well. Very interesting cliffhanger that you left the story at..

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#783

Haha good one. Love the names, Ahem and Jigar =P

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#784

11chap Its hilarious. NK's leelaji is no1 but jeejagi [ROFL]. Anjali's actin vas lol. Khushi's n her mind hehehe. Buaji do drop bombs often lol.
12 chap ji mom part was hilarious. Jst imagine payal n ji mom married n payal sayin 'ji momji sunne a' OMG it wuld b hilarious.
never xpected payal proposing akash
how ll arnav react when arnav cam out 2 knw abt khushi n d mommy boy??????

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#785

Fantastic! I don't how you lovely writers are putting this together. I was 🤣 at Harry Potterji!!! Your Payal is brilliant!

Can't wait until Arnav finds out about Jigerji!!

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amimus

@amimus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#786

Fantastic update. Loved it. I loved the whole scene with Akash and Payal .

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#787

tht was nice...wowww i hope the sharmas get lost sooon

lol

missed arshi tho😳

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#788

this is an amazing twist...u took the story to another level all together..great update..

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keshinee20

@keshinee20

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#789

awww loved it!!! waiting to know ASR's reaction on knowing about Khushi's rishta!

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#790

Tht was thorouhly entertaining... sersly.. harry potter JI!!! Omg!! Lol nd the kokila n sons really cracked me up espclly d ji mom... !! So good tht payal has decided to act brave jst lik her sis... eventhou u gav us practically no laad govner it was a grt chaprer!!