Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#821

God! Loving this KHICHADI !!
I was ROFLing!!!what a clever use of koki ahem n jigar!!!
N last para, I was like what the,tonsil tennis, very charming phrase!!
Fab fab fab update... N nxt one.. God can't wait for f firecracker show!!!

Edited by bhaktiii - 12 years ago

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#822

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Were my reactions:

Payal getting married? Mooning over Harry Potterji?

Kokila and Ahem???? You've just outlined the plot for SNS over 200 episodes 😆

Khushi AND Payal being married off???

Payal and Akash in Sheesh Mahal under the moonlight!?

What the?!!

I can't wait for the next part!

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#823

Tonsil Tennis??? really?? :-) That was wonderful! :-) It made me laughing like anything..never heard someone say kissing as tonsil tennis...

btw, now that you say yes,Akash does look like a grown up Harry Potter..

Ahem's Ji Mom was funny!! But Payal shocked me...:-)

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quicksand

@quicksand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#824

loved your update NB that was so hilarious 😛
the HarryPotterji was too funny...i was truly imagining Akash dancing on Pehla nasha🤣
i feel pity for Sharma family especially for ji mom !!!😆
thanks for pm :)

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#825

What can I say?? I just l0ve this gr0ping Payal wh0 plays t0nsil tennis with Harry P0tterji...I think I have heard 0f this Ahem s0mewhere...really weird name th0ugh. And ji m0m was hilari0us

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#826

Lmao this is called law of attraction! She oly kept praying that ladke wale pls dnt come n all ulta ladke wala came but not for her but thanks to her mouth she got in too! Buy one get one free :D

And her heart beats for laad governor her payal chimes for him n all his fine but her gotas glitter for him?? Lmao u got me there!! Love of life again gotas lol!

Oo payal guts man! N u talk too much aww!! Akash that is?? Doubt hota hain!

N why d oh devi mayya n what the??when u guys indulge in such stuffs? N that too nt at this level :p so sad f payAsh they jus now have dared to so pls give them privacy!! :D

Cheers

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-Emma.K-

@-Emma.K-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#827

Haiii I'm late again!

NB, I absolutely loved this update! It was hilarious.

You got me laughing so hard at a the Harry Potterji and hogwarts part. So Payal thinks of Akaash as her own Harry potter? I certainly love this Payal.

LOL I'm so proud of you for bringing in some of the SNS cast! And you did great justice too. I laughed out loud every time I read "Ji Mom". It's just so typical.

And the end!!! Oh my, definitely the best part. Payal actually kissed Akaash...full on the lips. And then he responded just as boldly! Why weren't they like this is the show again? 😆

Akaash wanting to dance to Pehla Nasha...and even practicing it alone 🤣

Poor Khushi is in a fix! She's getting married yet she can't get the Laad governor off her mind! Do eager to know what happens next, you left us on the edge!!!

This was excellently written, I really enjoyed reading it. And now I'm waiting for Rafa's update which I know will be awesome too 😃

Edited by -Emma.K- - 12 years ago

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#828

Wonderful NB ji!!

I love this Payal...she is feisty..Harry Potter ,Hogwarts and then the kiss... amazing.

Had a hearty laugh, reading about Kokila ji's bindi and Ahem's Ji Mom.. Poor Khushi is in a conundrum...her misconstrued fact about the ladkewale came true...

Akash's dauntless demeanor surprised me...

So Khushi and Arnav both perceived Payal-Akash..cannot wait to read more!!