JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 77

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeahh... I'm a guy here😆

Thanks Rimi ji for appreciation... It feels great when you post songs and shayaris here... Good to see someone so musically romantic into this forum... *FEELING CLOSE TO YOU SOME WAY*❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jai reading this update I felt one thing that u must be a very romantic person in real life. Such feeling of love and passion cannot be expressed by a less romantic person. Your husband must think he is a very lucky man. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Last part was too cute Jaya Ridhi snuggling to Naren knowingly. I like the amazing connection and love between the couples and also how close Naren and Ridhi are to Adrit. Love their friendship.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya, new pictures from yesterday can/should be used in ur story...too awesome to be missed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am giving magenta for the engagement.. Maybe white when goes on her first official date with him :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Magenta is a beautiful colour. Has Parvathi ever worn that colour ? Saree or something else ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
make her wearing white fairy dress whn she will come to mumbai in Naren-ridhi reception..ofcourse its only in Dr.Adrit's request and ofcourse in exchange of LINDT😆

just a guess yar..m not ordering you😃
Edited by Kadamvari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jayshree the last update very appropriately tiled awww. The end result is also awww it was that cute. I love the way your imagination works to dish out such sweet romantic moments. It has the right amount of mush and to imagine these two lovers are not even together. The growing essence of true love Adla. So nice. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
NOW

Meena settled Shyla comfortably on the bed and pulled the sheet up tucking her in.

She placed some sheets of paper and pencils on the night table.

Ranu [the attendant] will give your medicines a little later, I am going down for sometime.

She kissed Shyla on her forehead.

...

Closing the door quietly behind her, she spoke to Adrit in a low voice.

She will be given a sedative around 9 Doctor.

Normally she falls asleep half an hour after that and sleeps like a baby the entire night. Rarely she gets up. But not sure about today,

You can look in on her after she falls asleep, she told him understandingly.

They both walked back towards his room, as he was about to enter, Meena stopped and looked towards him.

Dr. Adrit I want to show you something, is it ok if I bring it now?

Sure Meena please do.

He sank into the nearest chair, his head back, looking at spinning fan.

Meena almost ran back with the box, in doing so, the box fell as she entered, spilling the papers.

The fan lifted and moved them all over the room.

Adrit looked at the papers fluttering , and slowly stood up, and bent to pick up one.

He was looking at a pencil sketch, a dimpled smile.

He picked up another, and another, and yet another.

He was looking at a room full of dimpled smiles, many with tear stains on it.

When she was brought in here two years back, this is all she sketched Doctor,

She used to sit for hours trying to sketch the rest of the face, and cry herself to sleep.

Then she stopped trying.

Meena stopped, feeling a lump in her throat.

Adrit went around the room picking up each sheet of paper. It seemed as if he was performing a ritual.

I kept trying to encourage her, Meena continued, initially she refused to touch the pencils, after much coaxing she started drawing the nature around her.She has never drawn the smile again.

Adrit looked at her, his face had gone serene.

When you first walked in, I kept racking my brains, you seemed so familiar.Now I see the same dimples,

He smiled,

and

YES, DOCTOR THE SAME SMILE, a tear fell from her eyes.

She turned away hurriedly wiping her tears,

Meena, before you go, I want to ask you one question, Her name?

Meena composed herself and turned back.

Doctor I realized you will ask me that question,

She placed a small box on the table.

You will want to be alone now, I am sure. Will talk to you tomorrow.

He kneel down gathering the rest of the sheets slowly and deliberately. He held them close..

La, he ran his fingers on the sketch,

Princess, Our love has held you to me.

Putting away the precious sheets safely, he picked up the box thoughtfully.

He chocked and sat down on seeing what was in it.

He closed his eyes,

Her face glowing. and he could hear her voice..

"I will never remove it Dr.A, holding the heart in her hand"

He slowly removed the antique heart out of the box.

Only one half was intact, with SHYLA inside

The other half was damaged and ADRIT had become eligible.

His fist closed on the heart.

La, La, he repeated her name softly as though even his whisper might hurt her.

He gathered the sketches and the pendant and lay down on the bed,

He held his La close to his heart.



Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
U made me cry jai. 😭 and nice sketches.

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