JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 75

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeah Jia Ka... I know its a FF... But I want a fan fiction on ADLA 'coz I think now I love them both over Moharika... And you know WHY😉

NOW was described fantastically as always❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya your NOW and the trailer are fantastic. I like them. And about NOW well I am waiting to see more recovery in Shyla. And want to know about the accident what takes her into this condition...
Please Keep Updating.
P.S. From now on I will have to do some important works. So I am asking apology for my late comment in advance.
Thanks.
Rimi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good going Jaishree updating both the past and the present. Adrit and Shyla echoes deep in my mind these days. Such a lovable jodi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u darling rimi sia and indu
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updts are all wonderful Jay. You are a superb writer. The emotions feel so real. Sadness happiness all heartfelt.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Enjoying the journey of these lovestruck souls even with all the pain and agony still gives me a lot of hope for a very bright future for these two. Good going. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww...

No tears pumpkin, you can cry when I am there to wipe them, he texted.Have to get her a Tab, he decided.

Tarun I can understand, he would do anything for Sweets, but Vishak too? How did he fall in with your plans, Ridhi was asking him.

He was hesitant, but came around when I told him I would never hurt her, Adi explained.

But you just gave her a cold, laughed Naren.

They settled down to discuss Mumbai Plans.

Guys'. Ridhi sat up suddenly.

Both of them looked at her.

What?

Shylu should attend our wedding, yipppeee she went.

Naren had a big smile and several ideas did a marathon in Adrit's head.

A rolled magazine hit his head, don't you get ideas Dr.A. she will be staying with us, not you, Naren chuckled.

Dr. A had an air of "We will see" around him.

He stretched his long form in the back seat of the car and shut his eyes.

Naren winked at Ridhi.

I think these two love birds should get married along with us in the same mantap.

He can then ravish her as much as he wants, Adrit heard Naren's stage whisper.

Naren,Yes I do go completely crazy when I am with her, but not to worry, will not ravish her till we are one officially he said with his eyes closed.

I just want her beside me Naren.

Shyla's sneezing had given way to coughing. Her throat had started to hurt.

She had to give suitable explanations to Mama, aunts, father and uncles about Dolphins, along with angry glances at Vishak and Tarun who tried to pitch in amidst giggling and nudging.

Cuddled under her bed sheet, she checked his message.

Naren and Ridhi were fast asleep. Nandu was driving.

Beep went his mobile.

Ok, No tears,😃

Hope sneezing stopped.😲

Sneezing stopped, coughing now . 😒

Gargled?😊

NO. 😃

😡

😭

Dr. orders.

🤢

Can I call?

😛

He put on his blue tooth, he was sitting in the front now, but did not want to disturb.

Dr. A..her voice was husky with all the coughing.

U should be sleeping La.

Cant,

He could almost see her pout.

Cough keeping me awake.

All my fault, he apologized.

Dr. A, I ' hmm but I loved the surprise.. her voice going a shade huskier.

His soft laugh left her blushing.

Comfortable silence followed..

Adi,,,,

Yes baby.

I' hmm'Nothing..

You better tell me..

I wanted something '.

Anything for my princess'

That music you play on ur laptop..the Saxaphone'

Kenny G?

Can u '.

I will, he promised even before she finished the sentence. Baby you should have asked before would have put it on the mobile.

Want to listen now? He asked indulgently.

Yesss she said happily.

He fished out his I pod, selected a song and placed it close to his mobile.

Can u hear?

Yess..

Its called"Forever In Love"

She smiled.

There was no more need for talk.

She listened and soon her eyelids drooped.

He heard her breathing go rhythmic. He knew she was lulled.

He lay back with a smile, hearing her sleeping was the sweetest sound for him.

Naren felt Ridhi's hand tighten around his. Both looked at Adi, She snuggled closer to Naren and fell asleep.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XHFWqk08tNY[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
really an awww update😳..loved the convo between Adi and La..it was damn cute😳😳..So Shylu to attend Naren-Riddhi's marriage..can't wait for the next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
too cute and how you read my mind?? i wanted to say that some dialogue like this should b put on Adi's mouth that Shyla's being with him is all he wants..getting physical with her is not his first priority..unless the way he was going like a super fast train can b misunderstood easily
Edited by Kadamvari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sory for being late. And congrates for completing 100 pages.1st i lovd their convo on boat. And the pain both had during their seperation.😭2nd now.Oh i felt bad for A that he cant go and hug her, he just has to see her frm far.Want to see them together again.3rd awww it was indeed an awww update. I cn feel adla's feelings of being in love. U cant even stay away for a sec frm the person u love dont knw hw they survivd without each other. Jai m addictd to them that cant even see them away for a sec.
Edited by foram. - 12 years ago

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