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anika97

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awww I want adrit now. Senti kar diya tumne

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Sindhu_us

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Posted: 12 years ago

Jaishree I bow down to thee. Genius update I can't help but cry reading this update. Such a beautiful update. That sketch wow drawn by Shylu trying to remember her Adi. That is all she has in her mind and deep in her soul. Your best work Jaishree. 👏

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sindhupv

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Posted: 12 years ago

The awww update was super awww. So cute it was I fell deep love for the two characters.

The next update was most emotional update that I have ever read Jai. Simply amazing it touched the deepest recesses of my heart. Superb superb. Adi my Adi that must have literally torn him inside. Those sketches amazing gives the whole scenario a perfect touch of reality.

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Anushya

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update jai..it made me cry😭😭she remembered his Dimple smile alone all these years..and i can actually imagine Adrit's reaction on seeing his sketches made by her..

you are an amazing writer jai👏👏you pen down the emotions in great way that we can feel Adla's love,pain,joy and everything👏

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Diala

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Posted: 12 years ago

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Words fail...

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JAYASHREE

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Posted: 12 years ago

thank u all girls ... me too lost for words about this appreciation... I did not realise u liked this update the best so far..
Love u all so much

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Krsna

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Posted: 12 years ago

Shyla-

Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage?

Kyu tu baandhe

Mann se mann ke dhaage?

Bas chale naa kyu mera

Tere aage?

Adrit-

Chhod kar naa tu kahi pe

Dur ab naa jaana

Tujhko kasam hai..

Saath rehna jo bhi hai tu

Jhooth ya sach hai

Ya bhram hai..

Apna banane ka jatan

Kar hi chuke ab toh

Baiyaan pakad kar aaj chal

Main doon bata sab ko...

Shyla-

Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage?

Kyu tu baandhe

Mann se mann ke dhaage?

Bas chale naa kyu mera

Tere aage?

Please open image in a new tab and have a look as it can't fit properly in comment box😊

Edited by krsna_R - 12 years ago

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JAYASHREE

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Posted: 12 years ago

those lips nikhi 😭 and those words

Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago

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Krsna

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Posted: 12 years ago

Specially for you Jia ka 😊

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JAYASHREE

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Posted: 12 years ago

how was the update 😲
thank u darling ... awesomeness

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