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Posted: 12 years ago
That was really an aaww..waala update, loved it, do continue soon and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jai.. Nice Update...
Awesome convo btn Adla...
Nice... 👏 Love u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was really an awww update. It was so cute Jaishree. Thank you for the love dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

too cute and how you read my mind?? i wanted to say that some dialogue like this should b put on Adi's mouth that Shyla's being with him is all he wants..getting physical with her is not his first priority..unless the way he was going like a super fast train can b misunderstood easily

Kadamvari...always the optimist 😉 !!! Anyway, Ad is very traditional. He want and talked to La's parents formally, and even is prepared to wait for 6 months, na?
On another note, Jaya, did you send Mahrambika picture to Sona ? You might want to make one with Sly and Mohit (as Rambo) and ask her to spot the difference !
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Posted: 12 years ago
NAHI RE i did not tweet her the pics. I hardly on twiter just peek in and post tweet to sona. I did not send her the link either. It is all lost amongs all the tweets. I have a feeling she drops in to read even without the links. Please do check the FOREVER IN LOVE BY KENNY G.. He is awesome and a mood maker. i have posted the video
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Posted: 12 years ago
You are making me helpless Jia Ka☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
One song for this situation...

❤️Tujh bina pagli purvayee
❤️Aake meri chunree mein bhar gayee
❤️Tu kabhi aise hi
❤️Gale lag jaise ye purvayee
❤️Saathiya sun tu...
❤️Kal jo mujhko neend na aaye
❤️Paas bulaa lena
❤️God mein apni sir lakh lena
❤️Lori suna dena...
❤️Chupke se lag ja gale
❤️Raat ki chaadar tale
❤️Chaand ki bhi aahat naa ho
❤️Badal ke pichhe chale...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

Awww...

No tears pumpkin, you can cry when I am there to wipe them, he texted.Have to get her a Tab, he decided.

Tarun I can understand, he would do anything for Sweets, but Vishak too? How did he fall in with your plans, Ridhi was asking him.

He was hesitant, but came around when I told him I would never hurt her, Adi explained.

But you just gave her a cold, laughed Naren.

They settled down to discuss Mumbai Plans.

Guys'. Ridhi sat up suddenly.

Both of them looked at her.

What?

Shylu should attend our wedding, yipppeee she went.

Naren had a big smile and several ideas did a marathon in Adrit's head.

A rolled magazine hit his head, don't you get ideas Dr.A. she will be staying with us, not you, Naren chuckled.

Dr. A had an air of "We will see" around him.

He stretched his long form in the back seat of the car and shut his eyes.

Naren winked at Ridhi.

I think these two love birds should get married along with us in the same mantap.

He can then ravish her as much as he wants, Adrit heard Naren's stage whisper.

Naren,Yes I do go completely crazy when I am with her, but not to worry, will not ravish her till we are one officially he said with his eyes closed.

I just want her beside me Naren.

Shyla's sneezing had given way to coughing. Her throat had started to hurt.

She had to give suitable explanations to Mama, aunts, father and uncles about Dolphins, along with angry glances at Vishak and Tarun who tried to pitch in amidst giggling and nudging.

Cuddled under her bed sheet, she checked his message.

Naren and Ridhi were fast asleep. Nandu was driving.

Beep went his mobile.

Ok, No tears,😃

Hope sneezing stopped.😲

Sneezing stopped, coughing now . 😒

Gargled?😊

NO. 😃

😡

😭

Dr. orders.

🤢

Can I call?

😛

He put on his blue tooth, he was sitting in the front now, but did not want to disturb.

Dr. A..her voice was husky with all the coughing.

U should be sleeping La.

Cant,

He could almost see her pout.

Cough keeping me awake.

All my fault, he apologized.

Dr. A, I ' hmm but I loved the surprise.. her voice going a shade huskier.

His soft laugh left her blushing.

Comfortable silence followed..

Adi,,,,

Yes baby.

I' hmm'Nothing..

You better tell me..

I wanted something '.

Anything for my princess'

That music you play on ur laptop..the Saxaphone'

Kenny G?

Can u '.

I will, he promised even before she finished the sentence. Baby you should have asked before would have put it on the mobile.

Want to listen now? He asked indulgently.

Yesss she said happily.

He fished out his I pod, selected a song and placed it close to his mobile.

Can u hear?

Yess..

Its called"Forever In Love"

She smiled.

There was no more need for talk.

She listened and soon her eyelids drooped.

He heard her breathing go rhythmic. He knew she was lulled.

He lay back with a smile, hearing her sleeping was the sweetest sound for him.

Naren felt Ridhi's hand tighten around his. Both looked at Adi, She snuggled closer to Naren and fell asleep.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XHFWqk08tNY[/YOUTUBE]



Tujhko jab bhi chaha puri siddat se chaha...
Jab bhi tujhe paya...puri siddat se he paya.
Tere dil-jaan-jism pe sirf haq hai mera...
Yeh sath ab na kabhi chhute tera-mera.
Chahta hoon tujhe apne pass...
Apne saye ke tale, palkon ke niche..humesha.

Jaya your Shylu's Dr.A made me a shayar...😆But for a change I want to sing this for Dr.A...
"Inn sanson ki pagalpan dekho tum/ayein inhe nahi chain/mujhse yeh boli rahon mein teri apne bichha doon main nain/ inn unchhe pahadon se jaan de doonga main/ agar tum na ayee kahin...tum idhar jaan ummid meri jo todo/ udhaar yeh jahan chhodu main/ maut ya zindagi tere hathon mein de diya re..."
Please Jaya I want engagement and marriage back to back...6months😡...please save Dr.A and me too. Please do something to pass these boring 6months quickly.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: krsna_R

One song for this situation...


❤️Tujh bina pagli purvayee
❤️Aake meri chunree mein bhar gayee
❤️Tu kabhi aise hi
❤️Gale lag jaise ye purvayee
❤️Saathiya sun tu...
❤️Kal jo mujhko neend na aaye
❤️Paas bulaa lena
❤️God mein apni sir lakh lena
❤️Lori suna dena...
❤️Chupke se lag ja gale
❤️Raat ki chaadar tale
❤️Chaand ki bhi aahat naa ho
❤️Badal ke pichhe chale...


Superb song selection Krsna👏...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god I just love that shayaris and songs flowing into this story. guys I have been saving all of this into my word file.
so much love for ADLA .. love u all girls and guys if any here

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