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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Brilliant Update!!!

Arnav's feeligs were so well written! I also liked reading from Akash's POV.

Thank you so much for the pm!!

This part was written beautifully and I cannot wait to read more:)

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9424976

@9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

oh yes I loved how he was in denial, and you did a great job at showing that! Cant wait to see more!

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

@revathysugathan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Perfect Perfect Perfect Perfect Perfect Perfect!!! 👏

I loved the part where you explained Akash's feelings. I hv always thought that Akash must hv been feeling all this but did not hv the courage to tell his Bhai - now I am happy to know that you think so too 😊

The Arnav in denial part was sooo good that I wanted Khushi to run without seeing him the next day just so that HE wud confront HER 😎

OOOh i can't wait for the next one

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

I just found your new FF...I follow Fortunate Events too...and read all the chapters...a very intense experience!!

I love how your focusing on their love story and I'm go smacked by the depth of thoughts and emotions that you've gone to with the characters...it's a delight to read.

I am totally with you on the way your developing Khushi...the way you're taking her character actually show growth...and as a result, Arnav has to grow too. In the show, Arnav seemed to grow a whole new personality overnight but Khushi was stuck in a Groundhog Day loop!

Can't wait to read how Arnav reacts to the new Khushi. Update soon please!! 😃

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

I love you have i ever told you that...i was just hoping you would update today and tada...i get ur pm...
This is sooo arnav...and i would'nt want anything less...
His hope of getting everything 'normal' not looking good eh?! Great update!!!! :D

Edited by Rabzooo - 12 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

that was a super great update

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

loved it.. arnav denying everything...

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

i love how he was trying to justify his actions e.g. saying he only wanted her to look at him and see her face at 12 to prove that the theory which he doesn't believe in is fake, completely ignoring the fact that when she wrote in her diary about avoiding him as much as possible, especially at 12 irked him

cant wait for all those WILL akak the spoilers you gave to happen

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archa2810

@archa2810

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

khushi must have gotten immensely confused

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varshapan

@varshapan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

lovely update!

what i liked best was the entire thought process of asr documented in detail - that was superbly written.

also, building up on akash's character. he is a man who did not have much role in the serial. but i like the way you have described him - a man with lesser courage and one who has always looked up to his bhai. someone who is silent but sensible in judging ppl. and loved the way the usually perceptive akash misses his brother's mannerisms when khushi is mentioned - coz he was so surprised by the lack of rage on his bhai's part that everything else was forgotten..

look forward to arnav now reacting to khushi's disappearance.