Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!*

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@..ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Awesome! Loved it! Update soon

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

really nice update, liked the part on arnav and akaash, its so sweet how akaash blindly loves and trusts arnav, the brotherly bond is very rare and endearing.
loved how arnav is trying to justify his thoughts and action regarding khushi, he is realising that she has become a part of his life, a habbit, a need, he was waiting for her in the morning and missed her when she didnt come.

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Great update. Hope to hear Kushi's feelings soon!!

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kpk1002

@kpk1002

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Loved it 👏 Have been waiting forever for the update 😊 Please don't make us wait too long for the next part Thanks for the PM.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

loved this update for its insight into both akash's and arnav's characters and akash's feeling for his brother... arnav nearly bursting into laughter seeing akash's get-up is a clear indication of khushi's influence in that he's learning to loosen up... akash fluctuating between gratitude, fear and embarrassment was cute! arnav's conflicted emotions were interesting to read... trying to come up with 'reasons' as to why he forcibly unveiled khushi's face and coming to the conclusion that he had grown 'accustomed to her face' or that she was a habit he couldn't shake was adorably done... can't wait to see his reaction to khushi's reply to his 'ultimatum': she did bring the jalebies as he wanted but didn't wait to 'see' him!

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

love your work, will read anything you write. but this one is a personal favorite

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Awesm update...
So He is going to miss Khushi...!!!!..
Waiting for the next chapter

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Awww he is going to miss Khushi

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mkd4020

@mkd4020

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

that was very well written... I realyy liked Akash trying to man up in front of Arnav to thank him, and actually come to think of it, Akash-Arnav do have a reall good bro bonding. And Arnav's dilema has been beautifully brought out.Well done.

Do update MDJND soon pls... It's been ages...